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Unselfish Greed
Two bodies intertwining
becoming one...
A passion all consuming
sparing none.
Limbs that stretch and
contort in ways....
Two minds lost in a
feverish haze.....
Unrelenting need with
such burning rage.
All inhibitions lost..
no longer caged..
Desire is now the
compass that leads..
Winding down a path
of elusive needs...
Eyes that hunger and
mouths that feed...
Taking of each other
with shameless greed.
Hands that stroke and
tightly pull flesh...
As bodies become one
in ravenous press..
Never enough between
these two..
An unselfish greed keeps
burning through..
becoming one...
A passion all consuming
sparing none.
Limbs that stretch and
contort in ways....
Two minds lost in a
feverish haze.....
Unrelenting need with
such burning rage.
All inhibitions lost..
no longer caged..
Desire is now the
compass that leads..
Winding down a path
of elusive needs...
Eyes that hunger and
mouths that feed...
Taking of each other
with shameless greed.
Hands that stroke and
tightly pull flesh...
As bodies become one
in ravenous press..
Never enough between
these two..
An unselfish greed keeps
burning through..
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Re. Unselfish Greed
10th Sep 2016 6:48pm
This brings out the id in me. Why be bound by safe and conventional desires? Why not indulge, see what we can get away with? Fine job knot2much. Glad to see you have a healthy appetite.
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Re: Re. Unselfish Greed
12th Sep 2016 1:53am
Thank you so much again
for your thoughtful comment
Sir Crow. I always look forward to your thoughtful insight.
Keith
for your thoughtful comment
Sir Crow. I always look forward to your thoughtful insight.
Keith
Re. Unselfish Greed
Anonymous
10th Sep 2016 6:52pm
Really enjoyed this read.
Bravo!
Bravo!
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Re: Re. Unselfish Greed
12th Sep 2016 1:55am
Well thank you so much for gracing my page I believe this is the first time we have met. I am looking forward to giving you a read. Thank you for your kind words.
Keith
Keith
Re. Unselfish Greed
Anonymous
10th Sep 2016 7:04pm
Such a deep passionate piece. Visual words that take your breath away, and linger within.
Nice sensual ink 💓
Nice sensual ink 💓
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Re: Re. Unselfish Greed
12th Sep 2016 1:57am
Thank you so much dear for
your continued support and
kind words. I always look to
hearing from you my talented
friend.
Keith
your continued support and
kind words. I always look to
hearing from you my talented
friend.
Keith
Re. Unselfish Greed
Anonymous
10th Sep 2016 7:18pm
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Re: Re. Unselfish Greed
12th Sep 2016 1:59am
I thank you for the
read and comment.
Usually takes awhile
to think of a title...
this came easily.
Thanks again,
Keith
read and comment.
Usually takes awhile
to think of a title...
this came easily.
Thanks again,
Keith
Re. Unselfish Greed
10th Sep 2016 8:24pm
Re: Re. Unselfish Greed
12th Sep 2016 2:01am
Beautiful Brenda,
It is always a pleasure
to have you stop by and
say hello. I thank you as
always for you more than
kind words of encouragement.
Loves
Keith
It is always a pleasure
to have you stop by and
say hello. I thank you as
always for you more than
kind words of encouragement.
Loves
Keith
Re. Unselfish Greed
10th Sep 2016 9:28pm
Hot. Favourite lines:
Desire is now the
compass that leads..
Winding down a path
of elusive needs...
Desire is now the
compass that leads..
Winding down a path
of elusive needs...
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Re: Re. Unselfish Greed
12th Sep 2016 2:03am
I thank you Solomon
for the read and comment.
I appreciate your kind
words Sir.
Keith
for the read and comment.
I appreciate your kind
words Sir.
Keith
Re. Unselfish Greed
11th Sep 2016 2:32am
'Never enough between
these two..
An unselfish greed keeps
burning through.. '
Beautiful last lines....
these two..
An unselfish greed keeps
burning through.. '
Beautiful last lines....
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Re: Re. Unselfish Greed
12th Sep 2016 2:06am
Thank you dear Kasia,
I am so glad that you
liked the last lines...
Wanted them to be tender
yet hungry...
Thanks
Keith
I am so glad that you
liked the last lines...
Wanted them to be tender
yet hungry...
Thanks
Keith
Re. Unselfish Greed
11th Sep 2016 9:57am
Re: Re. Unselfish Greed
12th Sep 2016 2:08am
Thank you for the read and welcome
to the deep underground. I will be
looking for to reading your ink.
Keith
to the deep underground. I will be
looking for to reading your ink.
Keith
Re. Unselfish Greed
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Re. Unselfish Greed
12th Sep 2016 9:40pm
Re: Re. Unselfish Greed
13th Sep 2016 5:32pm
I thank you so much for stopping by and taking the time to leave a comment. I am sure this is the first time we have met. I hope to cross paths again soon.
Keith
Keith
Re. Unselfish Greed
13th Sep 2016 6:12am
This is drenched with sensuality!
All inhibitions lost..
no longer caged.. > exactly that... back to our primal nature!
All inhibitions lost..
no longer caged.. > exactly that... back to our primal nature!
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Re: Re. Unselfish Greed
13th Sep 2016 5:38pm
Thank you so much
for the read. I am so
glad that you were
able to relate to it.
Thank you again,
Keith
for the read. I am so
glad that you were
able to relate to it.
Thank you again,
Keith
Re. Unselfish Greed
16th Sep 2016 4:42pm
"Eyes that hunger and
mouths that feed...
Taking of each other
with shameless greed.
Hands that stroke and
tightly pull flesh...
As bodies become one
in ravenous press.." <- so damn sexy! :)
I missed reading you luv....
mouths that feed...
Taking of each other
with shameless greed.
Hands that stroke and
tightly pull flesh...
As bodies become one
in ravenous press.." <- so damn sexy! :)
I missed reading you luv....
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Re: Re. Unselfish Greed
17th Sep 2016 1:57pm
Thank you for your more
than kind words. It is wonderful
to know that you enjoyed since
your opinion is held so high.
Keith
than kind words. It is wonderful
to know that you enjoyed since
your opinion is held so high.
Keith
Re. Unselfish Greed
20th Sep 2016 10:25pm
As ever, your words leave me inspired to sit in front of my computer for hours. I can never get enough. I would love your opinion on my latest post if you ever get a chance to grace my page again. 😍😍😍😍
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