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what i want.......
[inhale]
...is to infiltrate innermost
...intimate thoughts
with heated whispers
..soothing eardrums..
...issue commands
......in a humming basso..
lubricating moods
............lathering the mind
...warmth spreading
...loosening the spine
butterflies restless
...emotions fluttered..
a spilling of... incoherent mutters..
..calling forth the rapture
with lips impatient...
..a tongue yearning ..
nostrils flaring
....a throat contracting
aching to stretch
to taste
.....to smell
........to swallow
steaming remnants
......of my desire's passing
shoulders relaxing...
...breasts heaving...heart believing..
this is real...
....something genuine..
to make you feel
..supremely feminine...
..within your folds
firmly I hold....
.....kiss you gentle
expose the soul
...excite the mental
girl free yourself
...with these teasing sparks
... know there's no judgement
within our dark....
...where wiles surface...
...in a wilderness ablaze
a bud aroused.. a flower blossoming
...a pulsing here..
a throbbing there....
..walls grasping...
breathing..collapsing..
.......antsy..eager
of a something...a prying
..a pushing..
......a digging.....an excavation...
..there's no need for explanations
.........this exclamation
will prove my point...
.........anoint me pharaoh
as I spread the narrows
......of thy savage lands
... again and again
giving dictation....
.....swapping libations..
.........this mutual stimulation
driving us wild
...bodies conforming
boldly confirming...
..what wanton eyes
flagrantly spoke
...our wantings..haunting...
dreams and visions
as I fill you up...
...with all of my measure
mining thoroughly
..for sacred treasures....
... til your pleasure explodes...
true sentiments disclosed
...with eyes closed tight..
....yet seeing you clearly
......... and loving you dearly
with all of my might..
..yes its sensual
.......yes its raunchy
yes its graphic
.....yes its arrogant
yet always authentic
.......when I present it
always relieved
........when well received
...by virtue of woman
for your inner-standing
...be that beautiful landing
as we come from the high..
....of our consciousness
expanding..
[exhale]
Published 1st Sep 2016
| Edited 6th Oct 2016
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Anonymous
2nd Sep 2016 00:00am
I don't have sufficient words to convey how much I love this...on my list...and off to take a cold shower...Whew! ;)
Willow
Willow
"Exhale" for sure after going through all this poem
presented you to survive and rejoice for its wonder
and its climactic words.
presented you to survive and rejoice for its wonder
and its climactic words.
"a tongue yearning ..
nostrils flaring
....a throat contracting
aching to stretch
to taste
.....to smell
........to swallow
steaming remnants
......of my desire's passing"
Whew!!! And you talk about my writes being heated...This is a piece that has allowed my mind to take your imagery and run wild. I mean seriously...it is rare that an ink sets my mind into motion and inspires me to write. Great ink love!!! As always...💋💋💋
nostrils flaring
....a throat contracting
aching to stretch
to taste
.....to smell
........to swallow
steaming remnants
......of my desire's passing"
Whew!!! And you talk about my writes being heated...This is a piece that has allowed my mind to take your imagery and run wild. I mean seriously...it is rare that an ink sets my mind into motion and inspires me to write. Great ink love!!! As always...💋💋💋
Anonymous
2nd Sep 2016 00:58am
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Anonymous
2nd Sep 2016 2:15am
So passionate, sensual, visual...wrapped in delicious desire.
Truly exquisite, indeed. 💓
Truly exquisite, indeed. 💓
2nd Sep 2016 2:41am
First of all... I love the phrasing and the imagery you sketched with this one, it was almost as if I were there as a witness!
This piece moves me on so many levels... it's sensual, seductive and sexy, but it also has a tenderness in it:
expose the soul
...excite the mental
girl free yourself > this was deeply felt!
This piece moves me on so many levels... it's sensual, seductive and sexy, but it also has a tenderness in it:
expose the soul
...excite the mental
girl free yourself > this was deeply felt!
2nd Sep 2016 5:53am
Anonymous
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2nd Sep 2016 11:05am
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Anonymous
3rd Sep 2016 6:44am
So many phrasings I like in this, the way you play with sounds in the words. The stream of consciousness flow effortlessly carries the reader through this one. And, I think, it demands to be read aloud. I love the way you play on all the senses, and draw in the emotion, going deeper, the pharaoh unearthing treasure.
The one thing I'll mention that didn't sing for me in this is 'cum'; my reason for that is it makes that phrase too definitive. To me, "as we come from the high" makes the line a little more fluid, instead of specifically pointing at an orgasm.
The one thing I'll mention that didn't sing for me in this is 'cum'; my reason for that is it makes that phrase too definitive. To me, "as we come from the high" makes the line a little more fluid, instead of specifically pointing at an orgasm.
3rd Sep 2016 10:48am
Naj...bro! I mean wow...u did the damn thang, AGAIN!!! Erotic, sensual...perfection!! :)
3rd Sep 2016 5:10pm
.....and all in one breath. Very vivid and ultra erotic. A mind-Fuck Tour de Force. I dig it !
5th Sep 2016 1:04am
7th person to list this so I hope it;s home how well you did this..p.s thank that muse and obviously a low graceful awe inspired CURTSY BOW [as i slowly retreat]
Anonymous
5th Sep 2016 2:07pm
Excellent scripe.
5th Sep 2016 3:47pm
I love how you lend us
succulencly through
architectual heated imagoes..
Mmhh
-Howlings
succulencly through
architectual heated imagoes..
Mmhh
-Howlings
