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~immortal forest's kiss~with diamonddave75
sacred bridges
tranquil waters
purest blue
like your eyes
mossy hills
beautiful view
tree house
in the sky
deep in the forests
where fairies play
you take me here
a place to heal
the mortal world's
knife has struck
chivalrous you take me there
with wisdom fair knowing
they are wielders of powerful magic
broken and failing
the fey creatures surround me
saying they need a piece of your heart
to make me whole
raindrops nurture
our village
brilliant lucidity
as creatures kiss
unicorns gallop
so majestic
open fields
full of promise
the tears of the these creatures
mixed with the a portion of your love
given to my ailing form
my eyes ease open seeing the beauty
of your face as for the first time
having been in a cursed state
not able to see the wonders surrounding me
you kiss me gently on my ruby lips
telling me we are home
the magical creatures of this realm
have accepted us as one of their own
saying she is too a fair a maiden
for an outside world so cruel
you take me in your arms
as the meadow larks sing
dreams embrace, killing nightmares
deep in the enchanted forests
my soul dances as one with yours
modest life
mesmerizing
making love
by seductive fire
we wake
at dawn
to steal
another moment
now immortal
healed by loves charm
Published 28th Aug 2016
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28th Aug 2016 1:41am
Brenda.. lovely one.. thank you for dancing with me once again.. we are wonderful together.. always love collabing with you.. another beautiful ink.. love you..
Dave
Dave
28th Aug 2016 2:09am
Wow Crim & Diamond.......what a wonderful adventure thru the forest........outstanding lines all the way thru.......you two write with magic pens.......enjoyed the sexiness thru out this as well......tipping my pen with respect and luv to you both for a stunning write......purple luv & hugs xo :)
28th Aug 2016 3:17am
thank you graciously from us both lovely Flower for feeling the magic of this write :)
love Crim
love Crim
28th Aug 2016 2:22am
I believe your muses are highly compatible and mutually inspiring! Another gorgeous one! :)
28th Aug 2016 3:18am
Anonymous
28th Aug 2016 3:32am
A write to truly get lost in. You take us on this journey with you. One engulfed with love and showered with true serenity.
Beautiful ink 💓
Beautiful ink 💓
28th Aug 2016 3:36am
28th Aug 2016 4:15am
Such a breathtakingly, ethereal place these words take us to...
You write beautifully together
You write beautifully together
28th Aug 2016 4:57am
28th Aug 2016 3:24pm
Alive within the wonderful world of make believe
where fairies dance and play to find a wholeness
not many have experienced.
where fairies dance and play to find a wholeness
not many have experienced.
29th Aug 2016 2:45am
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29th Aug 2016 9:26pm
A delightful and moving fantasy and a fine collaboration. My favorite lines:
"the tears of the these creatures
mixed with the a portion of your love
given to my ailing form
my eyes ease open seeing the beauty
of your face as for the first time
having been in a cursed state
not able to see the wonders surrounding me"
I doubt that cursed state will last. I'm always amazed at your versatility Crim. "Disturbed" was a shocker, but this one has healing properties. Excellent work from you both!
"the tears of the these creatures
mixed with the a portion of your love
given to my ailing form
my eyes ease open seeing the beauty
of your face as for the first time
having been in a cursed state
not able to see the wonders surrounding me"
I doubt that cursed state will last. I'm always amazed at your versatility Crim. "Disturbed" was a shocker, but this one has healing properties. Excellent work from you both!
30th Aug 2016 11:13am
thank you Sir Crow my versatility has a lot to do with mood shifts sigh..
love Crim
love Crim
