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From the eye to the sky!

� � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � slid down someone's cheek one day
� � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � leaving a moist, wet trail on my way
� � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � crashed, into the earth ever so silent
� � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � and bound, a few grains into clay

� � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � Wind, sucked me out like reaper
� � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � only, to take me up, to the sky
� � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � pushed me, into clouds ever deeper
� � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � numerous, vistas I passed by

� � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � I journeyed from the eye, to the sky
� � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � only, to come, crashing down
� � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � difference, is I lift, spirits high
� � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � to the joy, I now, give a sound!

�2016 KDAmB. All Rights Reserved.

Author's Note: Written originally for the comp "Story of a Raindrop"

Written by KDAmB

Published 26th Aug 2016

All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.

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Re. From the eye to the sky!

crimsin (Unveiling)

26th Aug 2016 2:48pm

this truly beautiful KDAmB :)

love Brenda

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KDAmB

26th Aug 2016 2:55pm

Welcome Dear friend Brenda!
I thank you sincerely for the read and the kind compliment!

Regards
KDAmB
☺ ☺

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Anonymous

26th Aug 2016 9:17pm

So very beautiful. 💓
Your inspiring words of beauty was expressed so perfectly.
Truly felt deep within.

Well done, my sweet friend.

KDAmB

27th Aug 2016 9:52am

Welcome dear friend WTH... I sincerely appreciate your high praise and sweet words. thank You so much for your visit as well as your appreciation.

Cheers!
KDAmB

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anonymouslyhere (Pariah Shadow)

27th Aug 2016 5:21am

Great poem, positively genius!

~anonshadow😏

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KDAmB

27th Aug 2016 9:53am

Welcome dear AnonShadow Bro! Thank you so much for your generous and kind appreciation!

Cheers!
KDAmB

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HowlingWhelms (Noire)

30th Aug 2016 4:42am

just cannot describe what came
over me while reading this, just
can't..

but it was so uniquely soothing.

-Howlings

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KDAmB

30th Aug 2016 9:08am

Awwe.. MsWhelms.... Thank You! am ever so glad you liked it and felt that way! Truly honored by your kind words! Thank You so very much!

regards
KDAmB

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cheesa

30th Aug 2016 4:46pm

For a man who once said I'm not a poet I merely dabble. Now to write so beautifully and fluently must be a metamorphosis to challenge that of the catapillar to the butterfly.

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KDAmB

31st Aug 2016 7:40am

Bro...your kind words truly humble me... but in all honesty I don't consider myself a poet yet.. just a visitor dabbling his feet in the ocean of poetry.. your love and kindness is the biggest motivation..meant a lot..always!! Thank YOU!

regards
KDAmB

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LadyRain

31st Aug 2016 6:38pm

The many shades of a raindrop. This is just flat out gorgeous!