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Defibrillation
Familiar yet forgotten scents
Work just like defibrillators
Bringing back the heartbeat
Of dead memories
Like no other sense can.
Work just like defibrillators
Bringing back the heartbeat
Of dead memories
Like no other sense can.
Published 23rd Aug 2016
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Anonymous
- Edited 8th Nov 2018 00:49am
24th Aug 2016 7:07am
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24th Aug 2016 1:51pm
Thank you for your kind words and opinion.
Hmm, I'm not sure about that last line. I was trying to point out that seeing or hearing something doesn't bring back a memory the way fragrance can...
Hmm, I'm not sure about that last line. I was trying to point out that seeing or hearing something doesn't bring back a memory the way fragrance can...
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Nov 2018 00:49am
25th Aug 2016 00:08am
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8th Sep 2016 10:36pm
6th Jan 2017 6:36pm
So true. I can still smell powder paint and over things from my childhood. A very clever constructed poem. Impacting, that it blew the cobwebs of time . Very well done. Like it a lot.moog.
14th Jan 2017 11:39am
Scents can be powerful reminders. Good write Allison. Glad to see you're still on here!
