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A Letter !!!!
Dear God I been told that when I leave this world I have to stand at the gates before you then you will determine my fate Heaven or Hell .. Saint I am not Sinner I am and I know this I drink , I lust for sex ,I lay with women as man lay with women but with all that said remember me good hearted , kind person ,and loveable . Some say that's not enough to get me into your Kingdom but only time will tell and only God can judge me so to all the fake christian and , Holly Rollers and Hypocrites who think their fate is sealed don't be surprise to see me when he is turning you away....... lol
Published 21st Aug 2016
| Edited 4th Oct 2016
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22nd Aug 2016 8:56pm
The letter is confusing, it begins addressing it to God, then towards the end God is referred to in another 'person'.
To continue the letter format, "only God can judge" should read "only you can judge" and "he is turning you away" be "you are turning them away".
To continue the letter format, "only God can judge" should read "only you can judge" and "he is turning you away" be "you are turning them away".
