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~hope~
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pain soft rain drops
in the hue of azure
illuminating my soul
touching it delicately
giving it flavor
*
swimming in the depths
of self perception
sensing the vibe of others
touching sacred ethereal pools
*
a draught of tears
now storm clouds brew
behind my eyes
with a sweet rainbow's kiss
*
delicate is the day
tender are my nights
sensitive to the light
reflected in faces of others
*
I still shy away
from my inner voice
it's foreign music
strange but beautiful
*
delicate notes
being picked on the wind
of understanding
carried on the stream
of consciousness
*
to be brought to rest
on the mossy bed
of enlightenment
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where they take root
in hopes of lying in the shade
of a mighty redwood someday
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Re. ~hope~
19th Aug 2016 1:05am
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19th Aug 2016 3:48am
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19th Aug 2016 1:08am
When you take personal inventory, not always, but sometimes, such as now you find much beauty!
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19th Aug 2016 3:49am
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19th Aug 2016 1:35am
Said it before, I'll say it again...
When you spill tender, it's insanely beautiful...
When you spill tender, it's insanely beautiful...
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19th Aug 2016 3:49am
Re. ~hope~
19th Aug 2016 1:43am
This has an abstract and ethereal beauty to it that seems wise in a general way, but you personalize it at the end, bring it on home. Here's hoping you find that redwood shade. Sounds like paradise to me Lady Crim.
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19th Aug 2016 3:50am
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Anonymous
19th Aug 2016 1:49am
You make my heart heal'
A beautiful journey
Love🍃Trish
A beautiful journey
Love🍃Trish
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19th Aug 2016 3:51am
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19th Aug 2016 3:52am
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Anonymous
19th Aug 2016 2:45am
Such a beautiful passionate write.
I adore your expression...and imagery.
Such lovely ink. 💓
I adore your expression...and imagery.
Such lovely ink. 💓
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19th Aug 2016 3:53am
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19th Aug 2016 7:10am
Re. ~hope~
19th Aug 2016 7:34am
Youre so plushful and warm
feeling here
my hope and faith
is ... well you know, but I
guess a little takes us a
further, so uplifting my
ladyloves..
this makes me want to
cuddle in close, but
maybe it's me, my
emotions all over the place
-Howlings
feeling here
my hope and faith
is ... well you know, but I
guess a little takes us a
further, so uplifting my
ladyloves..
this makes me want to
cuddle in close, but
maybe it's me, my
emotions all over the place
-Howlings
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19th Aug 2016 12:12pm
thank you beautiful Howlings I adore your thoughts..
i'm all over the place lovely one you are perfect :)
cuddling in with you :)
love Crim
i'm all over the place lovely one you are perfect :)
cuddling in with you :)
love Crim
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Such a delicate and utterly beautiful piece!
One to cherish and reread... thank you for sharing!
Love, Duende
One to cherish and reread... thank you for sharing!
Love, Duende
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thank you graciously lovely Duende sometimes I don't know where my writes come from as I don't see this beauty in me maybe inspiration given from the ethereal realm if not taken for granted by me..
love Crim
love Crim
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19th Aug 2016 1:23pm
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19th Aug 2016 1:34pm
Re. ~hope~
19th Aug 2016 3:32pm
where they take root
in hopes of lying in the shade
of a mighty redwood someday
We all come home to the strong
roots of trees, Brenda. Their language
calls to us through the conduits of our
Spirit, and we feel their vibrations
travel from our feet to the core
of our being, and we call it home.
xo
in hopes of lying in the shade
of a mighty redwood someday
We all come home to the strong
roots of trees, Brenda. Their language
calls to us through the conduits of our
Spirit, and we feel their vibrations
travel from our feet to the core
of our being, and we call it home.
xo
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19th Aug 2016 3:36pm
Re. ~hope~
19th Aug 2016 5:16pm
What a beautiful poem. I'm pretty sure I have ADD because usually I have re read poems since I lose focuse. Your poem kept me in. I was eager to see how the next line would quicken my breath. Thank you for sharing!
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20th Aug 2016 3:34pm
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Anonymous
19th Aug 2016 9:07pm
Brenda.. simply beautiful... such a tender piece, expressed with pure emotion.. and vivid imagery.. i love these two verses..
I still shy away
from my inner voice
it's foreign music
strange but beautiful
*
delicate notes
being picked on the wind
of understanding
carried on the stream
of consciousness
truly breathtaking.. brilliant ink.. love you!!
Dave
I still shy away
from my inner voice
it's foreign music
strange but beautiful
*
delicate notes
being picked on the wind
of understanding
carried on the stream
of consciousness
truly breathtaking.. brilliant ink.. love you!!
Dave
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20th Aug 2016 3:35pm
Re. ~hope~
19th Aug 2016 11:48pm
You had me at the first word. Hope is a power thing. Never lose knowing that...<3
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20th Aug 2016 3:36pm
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so much beauty in your journey, Crim;
enlightenment blooms among the redwoods.
sensuality of the spirit...
enlightenment blooms among the redwoods.
sensuality of the spirit...
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20th Aug 2016 3:37pm
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21st Aug 2016 7:36pm
I could read Brenda everyday.
You have a way to take one to
beautiful places in you mind.
I just love this piece. I was having wonderful and peaceful day. It is even my tranquil now. Thank you for the gift of you.
Keith
You have a way to take one to
beautiful places in you mind.
I just love this piece. I was having wonderful and peaceful day. It is even my tranquil now. Thank you for the gift of you.
Keith
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21st Aug 2016 8:04pm
thank you dearest Keith I was having a rocky day you've brought peace with your comment..
xo Brenda
xo Brenda
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Anonymous
22nd Aug 2016 5:31am
My Beautiful Brenda, beautiful and delicate is this write just as you are...your words always sweep me away.
I love you very much!
Love always - Taryn xoxo
I love you very much!
Love always - Taryn xoxo
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22nd Aug 2016 11:42am
Re. ~hope~
25th Aug 2016 4:33pm
Beautiful writing. Your imagery jumps right off the page and into our minds. Each stanza sings the song of hope and beauty. I tried to pick out one stanza as a favorite, but I liked them all!
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26th Aug 2016 2:18pm
thank you most graciously Wolf for leaving your thoughts and gracing my pages with a visit..
love Crim
love Crim
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15th Aug 2017 1:19am
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