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You Possess
You
Silken
voice spinning me
round and round
Arousal
quaking world
turn me upside down
Tantalizing
touch stroke deep
bring gasp
Animal
awoke provoked
words like woven web
Need
unleashed urgent
greed for passions you
possess
Silken
voice spinning me
round and round
Arousal
quaking world
turn me upside down
Tantalizing
touch stroke deep
bring gasp
Animal
awoke provoked
words like woven web
Need
unleashed urgent
greed for passions you
possess
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Re. You Possess
Re: Re. You Possess
11th Aug 2016 8:53pm
Re. You Possess
11th Aug 2016 7:08pm
I like the fragmentation to this with, "silken", "arousal", "tantalizing", "animal", and "need." The framing with "You" and "possess" is equally clever. This is very well structured and worded. It's good to know what it takes to spin you Riotgirl. Inspired write!
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Re: Re. You Possess
11th Aug 2016 8:52pm
Darling Crow,
I'm so glad that you enjoyed this! I always love seeing you in my comments. I was playing around with structure a bit and decided I was going to let loose. just let it form itself.
I'm glad the fragmentation works here. Arousal tends to shut my brain down. Leaving no smooth flowing thoughts behind.
Oh, and next time you want to know what it takes to spin me, all you need to do is ask, sugar. No need to be shy, I only bite a little.
Always xoxo
R
I'm so glad that you enjoyed this! I always love seeing you in my comments. I was playing around with structure a bit and decided I was going to let loose. just let it form itself.
I'm glad the fragmentation works here. Arousal tends to shut my brain down. Leaving no smooth flowing thoughts behind.
Oh, and next time you want to know what it takes to spin me, all you need to do is ask, sugar. No need to be shy, I only bite a little.
Always xoxo
R
Re. You Possess
Anonymous
12th Aug 2016 3:57am
Very primal and intense...I like your style.
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Re: Re. You Possess
12th Aug 2016 4:27am
Re. You Possess
17th Aug 2016 10:21pm
Sugar I won't be shy. I'd love to find out what spins you honey. This is raw unleashed primal arousal. Your poem sure spins me. And I love to be spun by your words darling. ;)
Xoxo,
John
Xoxo,
John
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Re: Re. You Possess
My oh my. John dear, it's nice to hear from you. And such enticing words at that. It would be a pleasure beyond expression to dance with you, darling. We can spin until you're dizzy. ;)
Xoxo
C
Xoxo
C
Re. You Possess
21st Aug 2016 8:14pm
I like the idea of a sexual animal vibe!! This is great inspiration for me. Thank you for sharing.
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