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REVEAL
You've learnt so much
But what have you learnt of yourself
You have blundered in action
Plundered through hate
A complicit of judenrat and black slavers
They shout come here or I will kill you
Others promise eternal life
Which is the way for you
Or are you frozen
Like a buridan donkey
Betwixt stick and carrot
Awake dumb ass
It is Palm Sunday
Now is not the time for stubbornness
A gas explosion kills a girl in Aleppo
A young man on the Somme
A mother in Mauthausen
22 premature babies die in an electric fire
In a maternity ward in Baghdad
12 men walk away from their beloved
His mother wept waiting
And I waited for your light
Light on the begonia
As it came through the curtain
Revealed on angel wings
But what have you learnt of yourself
You have blundered in action
Plundered through hate
A complicit of judenrat and black slavers
They shout come here or I will kill you
Others promise eternal life
Which is the way for you
Or are you frozen
Like a buridan donkey
Betwixt stick and carrot
Awake dumb ass
It is Palm Sunday
Now is not the time for stubbornness
A gas explosion kills a girl in Aleppo
A young man on the Somme
A mother in Mauthausen
22 premature babies die in an electric fire
In a maternity ward in Baghdad
12 men walk away from their beloved
His mother wept waiting
And I waited for your light
Light on the begonia
As it came through the curtain
Revealed on angel wings
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Re. REVEAL
Sad and beautiful and rife with ironies. That is a grim tally, this world so full of constant tragedies. :( The Pulse nightclub shooting was discussed at length in a talk I attended on tuesday.
Judenrat, black slavers, those who commit atrocity to there own close kin. Buridan donkey is interesting. Not a term I was familiar with. A provocative write.
Keep waiting for the light from those begonias! It is good to love others even for their flaws as we perceive them. It is something those of us lucky enough to stay alive owe each other I think. Decency, compassion. As much as we can muster to beat back the darkness.
I enjoy reading your works. Namaste.
Judenrat, black slavers, those who commit atrocity to there own close kin. Buridan donkey is interesting. Not a term I was familiar with. A provocative write.
Keep waiting for the light from those begonias! It is good to love others even for their flaws as we perceive them. It is something those of us lucky enough to stay alive owe each other I think. Decency, compassion. As much as we can muster to beat back the darkness.
I enjoy reading your works. Namaste.
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11th Aug 2016 7:25am
Hey DC - yes the struggle is also against ourselves and when so much man made clouds generated and beyond our control - we must remember that us sun shine always
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Anonymous
11th Aug 2016 5:53am
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✌🏻Trisha
✌🏻Trisha

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11th Aug 2016 4:32pm
This reminds me of the three causes of disease: hate, desire and delusion.
Greetings from Pig Island!
Greetings from Pig Island!
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11th Aug 2016 10:03pm
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11th Aug 2016 8:51pm
I took this piece to me awake to your self, awake to your surroundings what have you learned and what are you going to do about it.... Understanding and reveal first starts with oneself.... Nice piece...
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
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12th Aug 2016 4:27am
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So im back and still have not
proper words for my dear
whale.
Cannot seem to find any, im
guessing it means this portion
of truth speaks ver well for itself.
-Howlings
proper words for my dear
whale.
Cannot seem to find any, im
guessing it means this portion
of truth speaks ver well for itself.
-Howlings
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