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Dance for Me
My mynd burning
out of control.
Thoughts of her
dancing...working
a pole.
Stroking it with such
constant conviction.
Seeing it as truth
not reading as fiction.
Gravity defied by
each smooth move.
Pole snuggly held
within tight groove.
Up and down with
style and grace.
The look of want
on my girl's face.
Lovely bare feet now
touching the floor.
Cheeks spread wide
stroking it more.
Bent over...her hair
almost to the floor
My eyes wanting and
begging for more.
My girl is such a master
of the tease.
She works the pole..
She aims to please..
How beautiful she is
now on her knees..
Eyes up...mouth watering
answering my pleas.
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Re. Dance for Me
10th Aug 2016 3:17am
I am glad that you agrees that she is lovely indeed. Thank you for the comment again.
Knot2much
Knot2much
Re. Dance for Me
10th Aug 2016 3:23am
Keith hot, sexy erotic I'm sure she is the most exquisite dancer of them all ;)
xo Brenda
xo Brenda
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Re. Dance for Me
10th Aug 2016 4:52am
Dearest Brenda,
She is all I think about.
As always I thank you for
stopping by and gifting
me with for presence .
Love
Keith
She is all I think about.
As always I thank you for
stopping by and gifting
me with for presence .
Love
Keith
Re. Dance for Me
10th Aug 2016 8:47am
I wouldn't be surprised if a line or two of this ended up in a song some where good stuff!
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Re: Re. Dance for Me
10th Aug 2016 12:30pm
Thank you so much for stoping at my page and leaving such a comment.
I so appreciative of your gracious words. I would likes to welcome you to the deep underground. I hope that you enjoy and I look forward to giving you a read.
Knot2much
I so appreciative of your gracious words. I would likes to welcome you to the deep underground. I hope that you enjoy and I look forward to giving you a read.
Knot2much
Re. Dance for Me
10th Aug 2016 8:11pm
Reads in such a way it almost blurs the line between what is going on in the pole dance and what could be going on in bed....
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Re: Re. Dance for Me
11th Aug 2016 4:20am
Well Solomon, your read it the way it was supposed to be blurred. Unable to differentiate between reality and fantasy. Appreciate you stopping by and leaving a comment.
Keith
Keith
Re. Dance for Me
10th Aug 2016 9:35pm
Re: Re. Dance for Me
11th Aug 2016 4:25am
Never been in the presence of a Gawdess before should I stand or knell? I am glad that you found my little girl hot and sexy. I really appreciate you gracing me with your presence and thank you for the kind comment.
Keith
Keith
Re. Dance for Me
11th Aug 2016 00:15am
You should add more to this. Get really gritty. I feel like that would be a fire read.
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Re. Dance for Me
11th Aug 2016 4:29am
I thank you for your comment and appreciate your suggestion but the poem was meant to be as the dance.....a tease
Thank you
Keith
Thank you
Keith
Re. Dance for Me
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Re: Re. Dance for Me
11th Aug 2016 5:59am
Beautiful Ms. Taryn,
I was wondering if you have ever danced. I must admit I would gladly pay a cover charge to see. I thank you and truly appreciate your always sweet comments.
Love
Keith
I was wondering if you have ever danced. I must admit I would gladly pay a cover charge to see. I thank you and truly appreciate your always sweet comments.
Love
Keith