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Candy Coated
Candy coated paradise in
technicolor dreams
live stereo surround sound
of our holographic screams
picture perfect poses
portray levitated lives
listen loudly to the language
as we speak it in our minds
struggling through easiness
just to break while fixing dreams
seems it's all for nothing
but then nothing's as it seems
technicolor dreams
live stereo surround sound
of our holographic screams
picture perfect poses
portray levitated lives
listen loudly to the language
as we speak it in our minds
struggling through easiness
just to break while fixing dreams
seems it's all for nothing
but then nothing's as it seems
Published 9th Aug 2016
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Anonymous
9th Aug 2016 5:28am
Nice one D. Rhythm. Love it.
Trisha
Trisha
9th Aug 2016 5:34am
Anonymous
9th Aug 2016 5:52am
What? You have a grassy ass? I kid I kid. You know me I am a dork. Love ya, Trisha
9th Aug 2016 3:27pm
10th Aug 2016 2:59am
Thank you,
a musing of thoughts and the bitter sweetness that life carries this is.
Just when you think... :)
a musing of thoughts and the bitter sweetness that life carries this is.
Just when you think... :)
16th Aug 2016 5:39am
Wonderful rhythm and rhyme, flow was so smooth! The ending summed it up perfectly.
