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Rabbit Hole
Take me down the rabbit hole
through shady alleys of grey
into the darkest of abysses
Take me where you want me to
the demonic places we need
to free ourselves from fear
Deep down
Deeper down
To the darkness
To endlessness
To eternality
Deep down
Fuck me as deep as you can
devour me like the devil divine
driving me into delicious oblivion
Fuck me in fields of euphoria
let us dance on wings of desire
to cascade into valleys of ecstasy
through shady alleys of grey
into the darkest of abysses
Take me where you want me to
the demonic places we need
to free ourselves from fear
Deep down
Deeper down
To the darkness
To endlessness
To eternality
Deep down
Fuck me as deep as you can
devour me like the devil divine
driving me into delicious oblivion
Fuck me in fields of euphoria
let us dance on wings of desire
to cascade into valleys of ecstasy
Author's Note
Massive Attack - Angel.
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6th Aug 2016 3:20pm
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6th Aug 2016 5:31pm
Thanks so much, Crim!
Sometimes I feel insecure about revealing my dark side, but comments like these make me realise it's worth it!
Much appreciated!
Love, Duende
Sometimes I feel insecure about revealing my dark side, but comments like these make me realise it's worth it!
Much appreciated!
Love, Duende
Re. Rabbit Hole
6th Aug 2016 10:17pm
"let us dance on wings of desire
to cascade into valleys of ecstasy"
Whew!!! Seductive wording....Very sexy write love!
to cascade into valleys of ecstasy"
Whew!!! Seductive wording....Very sexy write love!
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7th Aug 2016 9:32am
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7th Aug 2016 00:56am
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7th Aug 2016 9:36am
Grazie mille, Elario!
You always make me smile with your comments :-)
Nice to hear that you think the music suited the poem... isn't that the most amazing pole dance ever?
And yes... that damn rabbit ;-)
You always make me smile with your comments :-)
Nice to hear that you think the music suited the poem... isn't that the most amazing pole dance ever?
And yes... that damn rabbit ;-)
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7th Aug 2016 10:27am
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7th Aug 2016 1:39am
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7th Aug 2016 11:31am
Wow! Reminds me of a passion so intense; when the world stops and you don't care where you are or what you are doing. You just have to devour each other.
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7th Aug 2016 4:53pm
Wow! Thank you so much for your amazing comment :-)
Just have to devour... exactly that!!!
Just have to devour... exactly that!!!
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9th Aug 2016 10:25pm
Oooohh lordy I know what I just encountered... A soul who effuses passion from her very core!!! Goodness your ink could make me HUNGER lol
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10th Aug 2016 12:35pm
Lost for words, so I'm gonna quote you:
If u were trying to make my day, u have! :-)))
If u were trying to make my day, u have! :-)))
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Anonymous
10th Aug 2016 2:40am
Very hot steamy ink!💓
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10th Aug 2016 12:36pm
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Anonymous
10th Aug 2016 7:22am
This ink is squirming all in the abysmal depths of ecstasy. .. what a journey...
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10th Aug 2016 12:39pm
Wow... you leave me speechless...
Thank you so much for your wonderful comment!!!
Thank you so much for your wonderful comment!!!
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28th May 2017 1:13am
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Thank you so much for your comment... always nice to receive feedback on an older poem!
Great to hear you love it :-)
Great to hear you love it :-)