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3rd Aug 2016 00:17am
deep Haiku Dean is it by chance that one snowflake caused an avalanche? making me think today.. beautiful..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Anonymous
3rd Aug 2016 3:24am
Maybe it is..but I know for sure this is a haiku and its pretty damn good, you're on a roll Dean :))
I have no clue of forms
..am the floating particles
and this chill is the sensual
kind..loving how youre
leaving it to chance by giving
it possibilities.
Beautiful exotic calligrapher.
-Howlings
..am the floating particles
and this chill is the sensual
kind..loving how youre
leaving it to chance by giving
it possibilities.
Beautiful exotic calligrapher.
-Howlings
3rd Aug 2016 6:17am
....something so delicate as a single snowflake can cause a beautiful catastrophe from a kiss of the wind.....
Possibly...chance! :)
Possibly...chance! :)
3rd Aug 2016 3:21pm
This is both delightful and whimsical, Dean.
Such anticipation is a single thought.
Such anticipation is a single thought.
4th Aug 2016 6:54am
The calm before the storm is to be savoured as if it was (and it could be) our last
9th Aug 2016 8:48pm
Anonymous
13th Sep 2016 5:32am
lovely, poignant write...i adored your word-play upon this...
depicting both the silent unpredictability & beauty of nature.
thank you for sharing - X - barrie
depicting both the silent unpredictability & beauty of nature.
thank you for sharing - X - barrie
21st Sep 2016 8:29pm
You capture the gentle fall of a single snowflake that starts this massive chaos so perfectly lol my ng
