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LEAVES
Sun glance sucre dusts slate roofs
Kaleido dancing through ash trees
Big as eye lashes lifting Norse skies
Your sigh becomes a soft silence
Your proximous slumber a warmth
Your kisses cool as grapes
Plucked before dew forms
Sour to taste yet more
Years will make us wine
Best to bless than to be less
A library of dead leaves
Hate filed and cruelty filled
A mind fuck predatory ambush
To be read again in blood red again
Hush
Do not say how terrible it was
But how great it was to have survived
Meditate on the immediate and intimate
Be real
Only the timid imitate and intimidate
As if they could inflate infinity by blowing
In absence I see you
And that to come together we must
Let go and leave what past
Pulling away
The space between us
eX p And sssSSS
And I am a spaceman again and you
The big beautiful blue earth
Gathering storms are not here yet
Nor passing clouds present
A netted bream freed wild flaps and fights
To be dragged by forces upstream
We all have fucked up
A cap in hand caught crow caw
Echoing
It's always someone else's fault
And we're all someone too
Kaleido dancing through ash trees
Big as eye lashes lifting Norse skies
Your sigh becomes a soft silence
Your proximous slumber a warmth
Your kisses cool as grapes
Plucked before dew forms
Sour to taste yet more
Years will make us wine
Best to bless than to be less
A library of dead leaves
Hate filed and cruelty filled
A mind fuck predatory ambush
To be read again in blood red again
Hush
Do not say how terrible it was
But how great it was to have survived
Meditate on the immediate and intimate
Be real
Only the timid imitate and intimidate
As if they could inflate infinity by blowing
In absence I see you
And that to come together we must
Let go and leave what past
Pulling away
The space between us
eX p And sssSSS
And I am a spaceman again and you
The big beautiful blue earth
Gathering storms are not here yet
Nor passing clouds present
A netted bream freed wild flaps and fights
To be dragged by forces upstream
We all have fucked up
A cap in hand caught crow caw
Echoing
It's always someone else's fault
And we're all someone too
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Re. LEAVES
The words employed in this write sure have earned their salaries
"Meditate on the immediate and intimate
Be real
Only the timid imitate and intimidate
As if they could inflate infinity by blowing"
~~~~~~
You're a worthy boss on this write
It's really well written xD
"Meditate on the immediate and intimate
Be real
Only the timid imitate and intimidate
As if they could inflate infinity by blowing"
~~~~~~
You're a worthy boss on this write
It's really well written xD
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2nd Aug 2016 6:16am
What a great comment - got in mind those "words" in helmets with pick axe and shovel working those seams down in that mine:)
Re. LEAVES
Whale. . .
let key figure put a way to say or
express this:
Its an early morning
waves are freely speaking
the moon is as its peak..
Now I want to say that you have
no idea what this masteringpiece
just done for me.
You have no idea how the
streams suddenly flowed in
the opposite direction
you have no idea how these
these whispered breathe...
This is a soul urging piece,
and for that.. im listening
..im taking heed to your words..
for whatever reasons
I find them life giving, so I
have to thank you with every
trace of ether inside me..
Am wanting to go on and on but
think this is enough ..
Haaa, merci
-Howlings
let key figure put a way to say or
express this:
Its an early morning
waves are freely speaking
the moon is as its peak..
Now I want to say that you have
no idea what this masteringpiece
just done for me.
You have no idea how the
streams suddenly flowed in
the opposite direction
you have no idea how these
these whispered breathe...
This is a soul urging piece,
and for that.. im listening
..im taking heed to your words..
for whatever reasons
I find them life giving, so I
have to thank you with every
trace of ether inside me..
Am wanting to go on and on but
think this is enough ..
Haaa, merci
-Howlings
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Re: Re. LEAVES
2nd Aug 2016 6:44am
O'Whelm we survived and that's enough (for now) and our words are the medals of this and your words in particularly to me - this is why we write
Re. LEAVES
2nd Aug 2016 8:55am
can you hear us, Major Tom?
what leaf bears the print of me, or any of us;
sorting thru & not finding...
what leaf bears the print of me, or any of us;
sorting thru & not finding...
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Re. LEAVES
2nd Aug 2016 10:47am
Beautiful. Clean. Solid. Creative verbiage and metaphors, leading into profound truths. Love it.
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3rd Aug 2016 5:48am
Re. LEAVES
2nd Aug 2016 11:36am
"Best to bless than to be less
A library of dead leaves
Hate filed and cruelty filled
A mind fuck predatory ambush
To be read again in blood red again"
dearest Whale so profound is your ink yes we are doomed to repeat history..
come full circle and learn the same lessons over and over..
awe inspiring is your wisdom..
love Crim
A library of dead leaves
Hate filed and cruelty filled
A mind fuck predatory ambush
To be read again in blood red again"
dearest Whale so profound is your ink yes we are doomed to repeat history..
come full circle and learn the same lessons over and over..
awe inspiring is your wisdom..
love Crim
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3rd Aug 2016 5:50am
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Anonymous
2nd Aug 2016 4:49pm
True words indeed. We are part of it whether we realize it or not.
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Re. LEAVES
2nd Aug 2016 6:25pm
Hush
Do not say how terrible it was
But how great it was to have survived -
AH that's so good, i'm jealous!
the whole thing is tremendous, whale,
really creative work
Do not say how terrible it was
But how great it was to have survived -
AH that's so good, i'm jealous!
the whole thing is tremendous, whale,
really creative work
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3rd Aug 2016 5:52am
have been stunned by your futurist juxtapositions so pleased you're a little jealous lol
Re. LEAVES
2nd Aug 2016 10:54pm
a mosaic of morsels, for the mind and spirit, I am thankful you shared this whale...
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3rd Aug 2016 5:53am
Re. LEAVES
3rd Aug 2016 4:47pm
Hush
Do not say how terrible it was
But how great it was to have survived
We cannot look back and hope to move forward;
what we can do is look through to understand
what we don't want to manifest in the future.
This is beautiful, my Brother, and a language
I completely understand without the need of
a translator.
We ARE all someone too; not just others.
Change begins with our self. SO blessed
to know you in this life.
Do not say how terrible it was
But how great it was to have survived
We cannot look back and hope to move forward;
what we can do is look through to understand
what we don't want to manifest in the future.
This is beautiful, my Brother, and a language
I completely understand without the need of
a translator.
We ARE all someone too; not just others.
Change begins with our self. SO blessed
to know you in this life.
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3rd Aug 2016 7:54pm
And I am blessed with you my sister - yes, we only need to change ourselves thank God change is the only constant
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3rd Aug 2016 8:55pm
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5th Aug 2016 3:44pm
Your kisses cool as grapes
Plucked before dew forms
Sour to taste yet more
Years will make us wine
Great write my friend , I love that stanza...
Plucked before dew forms
Sour to taste yet more
Years will make us wine
Great write my friend , I love that stanza...
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11th Nov 2016 11:15pm
Re. LEAVES
11th Aug 2016 1:48pm
Glorious, 'Hush
Do not say how terrible it was
But how great it was to have survived', how beautiful to have visited here today.
Do not say how terrible it was
But how great it was to have survived', how beautiful to have visited here today.
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11th Nov 2016 11:14pm