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Theater Of The Mind
I know I spit a lot of hate
Through all the words I bleed
All violence as I seal fate
As if I must concede
The voices feed me darkness
my hands they must obey
Another bloody carcass
In words I'm forced to say
Don't judge me as if I'm broken
Twisted and deranged
Just honest and out spoken
My reality unchanged
I write this way to please me
Emotionally I'm fine
Just horror movies on paper
Theater of the mind.
Through all the words I bleed
All violence as I seal fate
As if I must concede
The voices feed me darkness
my hands they must obey
Another bloody carcass
In words I'm forced to say
Don't judge me as if I'm broken
Twisted and deranged
Just honest and out spoken
My reality unchanged
I write this way to please me
Emotionally I'm fine
Just horror movies on paper
Theater of the mind.
Published 27th Jul 2016
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27th Jul 2016 10:21pm
27th Jul 2016 10:36pm
Well thank you... I just have a feeling most people read my work and find it a little to twisted... But they are all just mental horror movies... Thank you for the comment...
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28th Jul 2016 8:33pm
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28th Jul 2016 10:56pm
2nd Aug 2016 2:08am
Love your rhythmic flow. Very polished with a message, instead of cheesy rhyming just to be rhyming.
So refreshing to read you. Your mind, a great theater to visit. :)
So refreshing to read you. Your mind, a great theater to visit. :)
2nd Aug 2016 4:17pm
Anonymous
3rd Aug 2016 10:14pm
A darkness wrapped in truth.
Love the flow of this piece.
Love the flow of this piece.
4th Aug 2016 4:50pm
Anonymous
5th Aug 2016 4:44am
LBV, nothing but respect for you in never compromising what you feel and how you say it...it takes guts to call a spade a spade...the rhythmic flow of this write was impeccable. Bravo!
With love - Taryn xoxo
With love - Taryn xoxo
5th Aug 2016 3:36pm
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