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The Last Stooge
His words travel these ducts at the oddest hours
Cool air displaced as they go by
Delusions on the tip of his tongue
Demanding a blood sacrifice
Could be he released a plague
Left to his own device
It's hum heard right through the wall
As hairline cracks go fissure
War be with my neighbor mine
Undeclared by local law
Say adios to the diplomats
Ignored by the last stooge standing.
Dedicated to the fool next door.
Cool air displaced as they go by
Delusions on the tip of his tongue
Demanding a blood sacrifice
Could be he released a plague
Left to his own device
It's hum heard right through the wall
As hairline cracks go fissure
War be with my neighbor mine
Undeclared by local law
Say adios to the diplomats
Ignored by the last stooge standing.
Dedicated to the fool next door.
Published 23rd Jul 2016
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23rd Jul 2016 10:23pm
....oh to be a fly on your wall, or glass-to-ear-to wall. Either way, I'm a nosy neighbor until my neighbor(s) scare me shit-less. o_O
The imagery was m night shyamalan-ish. ;) Loved it!
The imagery was m night shyamalan-ish. ;) Loved it!
25th Jul 2016 8:24pm
M. Night Shyamalan's not a bad influence, "Lady In the Lake" notwithstanding. I feel like I've been dropped into "Devil" only in a somewhat larger space, a one-room unit. Gotta deal with the devil next door. Thanks Rain! We should compare notes on horror flicks sometime.
23rd Jul 2016 10:46pm
This poem evoked images of frightful neighbours. Like I'm listening to conversations by the characters in Rosemary' Baby :) Crowfly, an interesting write.
25th Jul 2016 8:32pm
Thanks Grace! I can only hear this neighbor mumbling, but that's bad enough, nearly as sinister. I'd almost rather deal with Rosemary's neighbors than this guy next door and the plague of bed bugs he's generated. I fear he'll be the one left standing...
24th Jul 2016 1:38am
Dang Crow......we must live in the same neghborhood and don't know it.......LOL!! Luvin this.....you're good at these dark writes......you always leave me quivering.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
25th Jul 2016 8:35pm
Maybe I'm sadistic but I love to set you aquiver Flower. Sounds like we might both live in Wicked City. Thank you!
24th Jul 2016 12:40pm
Sir Crow chilling write what a creepy neighbor this must be..
great ink..
love Crim
great ink..
love Crim
25th Jul 2016 8:38pm
Thanks Crim! The guy is deeply disturbing, to me and other neighbors. A talk with the landlord this morning indicates that he'll be out of here fairly soon and placed somewhere he can be monitored. Until then I'm just trying to ignore the craziness next door without going bonkers myself.
26th Jul 2016 5:58am
Ohhh now i got the theme song to mr rogets neighborhood. Playing eerily in my head...having a creepy neighbor would ..well.. creep me out..hope all goes well..Awesome ink crowfly
