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A Collective of Love
Our love isn't measured by thrust
anymore
It's measured by understanding
and sharing
Pieces of a life so enthralling,
just brushing against each other
In the night is our erotic
Nobody can own universal romance
You take a vow and live within the glorious
and the bittersweet moments
Walking hand in hand, a union of spirits,
a collective of love
That's our love, brilliantly shining, dancing
in a summer breeze
anymore
It's measured by understanding
and sharing
Pieces of a life so enthralling,
just brushing against each other
In the night is our erotic
Nobody can own universal romance
You take a vow and live within the glorious
and the bittersweet moments
Walking hand in hand, a union of spirits,
a collective of love
That's our love, brilliantly shining, dancing
in a summer breeze
Published 22nd Jul 2016
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Anonymous
22nd Jul 2016 11:15pm
Your energie here, swept me
up and far.
Too beautiful thank you for
revealing such revelry
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up and far.
Too beautiful thank you for
revealing such revelry
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23rd Jul 2016 1:26am
23rd Jul 2016 1:14am
23rd Jul 2016 1:27am
Love is what makes me breathe everyday, PS. <3 Love your softer side by the way.
23rd Jul 2016 11:17am
24th Jul 2016 11:15pm
a delicately beautiful poem - I was really able to relate to this one and this experience :-)
25th Jul 2016 1:23am
26th Jul 2016 9:03am
26th Jul 2016 12:07pm
