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The Braid
She seems a bit neurotic
Eccentricities to spare
But her presence is erotic
As she descends the stair
Her long hair twisted in a braid
Which she wields in her grip
Scars begin to fade
New wounds healed by a whip
Her braid becomes a tether
Looks like she'll remain
Could be we'll stick together
If her hair can take the strain...
Eccentricities to spare
But her presence is erotic
As she descends the stair
Her long hair twisted in a braid
Which she wields in her grip
Scars begin to fade
New wounds healed by a whip
Her braid becomes a tether
Looks like she'll remain
Could be we'll stick together
If her hair can take the strain...
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Re. The Braid
21st Jul 2016 5:32pm
...now that's a picture perfect image for the imagery of this ink, crow.
hmmm....men and pulling long hair, definitely erotic.
btw... pleasure breeding a little pain- yes her braid can withstand the strain. ;)
hmmm....men and pulling long hair, definitely erotic.
btw... pleasure breeding a little pain- yes her braid can withstand the strain. ;)
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Re: Re. The Braid
21st Jul 2016 7:08pm
Thanks Tara. I've been showing far too much restraint. Now when she says "Harder, moron!" I'll take it under advisement.
Re: Re. The Braid
22nd Jul 2016 8:54am
You speak and apparently imagine like a Sade video. Thank you for that, Rain
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21st Jul 2016 7:01pm
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21st Jul 2016 7:09pm
Re. The Braid
Anonymous
22nd Jul 2016 00:59am
Hey Crow.......I enjoyed this write very much.......the image of her amd words mixed......made this very sexy.....well done.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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25th Jul 2016 7:50pm
Re. The Braid
22nd Jul 2016 8:58am
Damn, Crow you catch and unpack the nuances most miss, every time. Getting lost in watching her grip her hair, until everything you've desired to do with it, drifts through and slips is a good recognition of details in daydreams. Allllllso, I can't help it. As well I can get lost watching a woman with poise and grace descend stairs. In the right view it can be even better than ascending stairs a step behind.
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Re: Re. The Braid
25th Jul 2016 7:53pm
I agree Loki. There's nothing like watching a woman descend the stairs with elegance and style. And there's nothing like a goddess with great legs. Thanks my friend!
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Anonymous
25th Jul 2016 6:38pm
A delicious erotic piece.
Beautiful imagery.
Beautiful imagery.
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25th Jul 2016 7:49pm
Re. The Braid
26th Jul 2016 6:03am
This was Flawless..absolutely love the sensual undertones ..your words painted a vibrant picture .enjoyed!
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Re. The Braid
26th Jul 2016 6:43pm
I like the underlying cures of affection here
from life's ill. Very lovely Crowfly.
-Howlings
from life's ill. Very lovely Crowfly.
-Howlings
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