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Father's Land, Mother's Song
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I follow ponies 'cross the stream
While as they drink among the reeds,
Spring-choked water, stiff-backed stems
That pull upon my buckskin hem.
The sunset air alights the glow
With only sounds of currents' flow.
Of dandelions' lazy rush
To graze across my cheeks their blush.
I step upon my Father's land,
The water from my leggings' ran
While on a journey heading home,
And I with Mother's song to roam.
For there ahead of me I hear
The lilting weep of Mother's tears
Where lodges of ghost shaman stood,
And songs that did her people good.
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I follow ponies 'cross the stream
While as they drink among the reeds,
Spring-choked water, stiff-backed stems
That pull upon my buckskin hem.
The sunset air alights the glow
With only sounds of currents' flow.
Of dandelions' lazy rush
To graze across my cheeks their blush.
I step upon my Father's land,
The water from my leggings' ran
While on a journey heading home,
And I with Mother's song to roam.
For there ahead of me I hear
The lilting weep of Mother's tears
Where lodges of ghost shaman stood,
And songs that did her people good.
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Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 19th Jul 2016
| Edited 12th Sep 2016
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Re. Land of Father's, Mother's Song
19th Jul 2016 6:22am
Jade as I read this...
I hear the Human Beings chanting to the drums, dancing the ghost dance in the Lakota's Black Hills...
Beautiful delicate and mournful lament...
Deeply felt...
geoff
I hear the Human Beings chanting to the drums, dancing the ghost dance in the Lakota's Black Hills...
Beautiful delicate and mournful lament...
Deeply felt...
geoff
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Re. Land of Father's, Mother's Song
19th Jul 2016 7:21am
This poem was a lovely read. Has a classic rock feel to it. Though that's how I read it hehe ^^
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Re: Re. Land of Father's, Mother's Song
19th Jul 2016 8:57am
Thank you, DC, for enjoying.., however you hear it is fine, there is no right or wrong. :)
Re. Land of Father's, Mother's Song
19th Jul 2016 7:41am
Re: Re. Land of Father's, Mother's Song
19th Jul 2016 9:00am
Re. Land of Father's, Mother's Song
19th Jul 2016 8:46am
rich portrait of a land so savage & pristine;
a sky so big & poetry so beautiful...
a sky so big & poetry so beautiful...
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Re: Re. Land of Father's, Mother's Song
19th Jul 2016 9:05am
Oh my, John, I'm a humble poet in the wake of your words, and I thank you.
Re. Land of Father's, Mother's Song
19th Jul 2016 12:23pm
While this speaks to the plight of "Native Americans" - the true indigenous peoples of this country, there are elements that read on a universal level which makes it that much more spectacular ... Great ink!
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Re: Re. Land of Father's, Mother's Song
Lobo my friend, thank you. I'm humbly grateful to receive your words of embrace.
-Jadey🌾
-Jadey🌾
Re. Land of Father's, Mother's Song
19th Jul 2016 12:45pm
A beautiful poem, a tribute to your people. I wish I could write like that, Jade:)
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Re: Re. Land of Father's, Mother's Song
20th Jul 2016 00:23am
Grace, you are a beautiful soul and human being who's heart you write from. I thank you for embracing anything of mine, you honor me!
-Jadey xo
-Jadey xo
Re. Land of Father's, Mother's Song
19th Jul 2016 8:55pm
Jade, your words transport me to this tranquil yet haunting scene. I feel so much peaceful energy in this passage, "Of dandelions' lazy rush
To graze across my cheeks their blush. " Brava querida alma!
To graze across my cheeks their blush. " Brava querida alma!
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Re: Re. Land of Father's, Mother's Song
20th Jul 2016 00:31am
Re. Land of Father's, Mother's Song
19th Jul 2016 9:11pm
A beautiful Native American tale with the prodigal daughter returned home. Then it's pure magic at the end, with the appearance of the shaman. This one's a keeper...
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Re: Re. Land of Father's, Mother's Song
20th Jul 2016 00:55am
Ah thank you, friend crowfly, for enjoying & supporting my humble ink, and for your recommendation!
Jadey🌾
Jadey🌾
Re. Land of Father's, Mother's Song
19th Jul 2016 9:52pm
Re: Re. Land of Father's, Mother's Song
20th Jul 2016 1:08am
Re. Land of Father's, Mother's Song
Anonymous
20th Jul 2016 3:51pm
Jade this lightened my soul. Sometimes I forget where I come from. Thank you for walking beside me.
Trisha. ...👣👣
Trisha. ...👣👣
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Re. Land of Father's, Mother's Song
Re. Land of Father's, Mother's Song
21st Jul 2016 5:00am
ah much has been said already about your lovely and thoughtful poem, but just wanted to add my voice to the chorus and say that it's a fine poem indeed.
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Re: Re. Land of Father's, Mother's Song
21st Jul 2016 7:16am
Thank you, Van...
That's most kind of you, I'm glad you could stop by for a read and a share.
That's most kind of you, I'm glad you could stop by for a read and a share.