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'An Open Invitation...'
Everything-Right
I-Need
Erogenous zonin'
bonin' my mind
Reality, twists
it's yearn to find
Is there a woman
who's want is mine?
Never know
til we 'delve n' unwind'
Each n' every desire,
I'm oft ill of fire
R we both in equal need...dire?
I, pray she feels
n' feeds her hunger
nestled within my grasp,
I wander...
Every wonder, a woman
much like a "World's Wonder"
A true beauty...
thy heart plunders
Poundin' beats
of profound passion
Please...Be that one,
who gives, who wants
a soul of fire,
ecstatic ecstasy awaits
to embue, cum n'
indulge in what's yours
for the askin...'
I-Need
Erogenous zonin'
bonin' my mind
Reality, twists
it's yearn to find
Is there a woman
who's want is mine?
Never know
til we 'delve n' unwind'
Each n' every desire,
I'm oft ill of fire
R we both in equal need...dire?
I, pray she feels
n' feeds her hunger
nestled within my grasp,
I wander...
Every wonder, a woman
much like a "World's Wonder"
A true beauty...
thy heart plunders
Poundin' beats
of profound passion
Please...Be that one,
who gives, who wants
a soul of fire,
ecstatic ecstasy awaits
to embue, cum n'
indulge in what's yours
for the askin...'
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Re. 'An Open Invitation...'
16th Jul 2016 1:34am
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16th Jul 2016 1:52am
No... Hence the piece lol. Anyways, thank you my sweet one I truly appreciate your thoughts n support always :)
Re. 'An Open Invitation...'
16th Jul 2016 2:53am
Poe she's there looking just like you I believe you will cross paths..
excellent ink..
love Crim
excellent ink..
love Crim
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Re. 'An Open Invitation...'
Anonymous
16th Jul 2016 3:40am
Suction my air
..all of it from me why don't ya.
Mhhmm, your heart's swollen
and my soul is overfilled with
This piece.
Where my musing calligraphist.
I'm steamed with envy here! ;)
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..all of it from me why don't ya.
Mhhmm, your heart's swollen
and my soul is overfilled with
This piece.
Where my musing calligraphist.
I'm steamed with envy here! ;)
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Re: Re. 'An Open Invitation...'
16th Jul 2016 8:24am
Envious? Why? lol. There's no one to envious of sweetheart lol. BUT I'm deeply flattered n truly grateful as always for your passion n support :)
Re. 'An Open Invitation...'
Anonymous
16th Jul 2016 8:21pm
y'know she's out there, you just have to keep on trying and at times its the only thing we can do...keep on trying.
..and then you'll show her all the poems you wrote for her just waiting to find her :)
..and then you'll show her all the poems you wrote for her just waiting to find her :)
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Re: Re. 'An Open Invitation...'
16th Jul 2016 9:31pm
Re. 'An Open Invitation...'
17th Jul 2016 00:26am
Don't know what it is PM but I've read these words a few times in different ways and still it comes back to a medieval feeling with a modern slant on it...
I don't know poets of that era so I can't offer up any names but that's the overall (?) feel I get from this one...maybe have you dressed as a wandering ministrel sprouting these words to all and sundry... ;-)
Oh yeah, I enjoyed the read... :-)
I don't know poets of that era so I can't offer up any names but that's the overall (?) feel I get from this one...maybe have you dressed as a wandering ministrel sprouting these words to all and sundry... ;-)
Oh yeah, I enjoyed the read... :-)
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Re: Re. 'An Open Invitation...'
17th Jul 2016 00:43am
Aaaawwww my sweet K... U have me blushing... Thank u so very much for ur sweetness n support :)
Re. 'An Open Invitation...'
18th Jul 2016 8:50am
Re: Re. 'An Open Invitation...'
18th Jul 2016 12:32pm
More like daydreaming about it... I'm
flattered you still visit my rambling's mami n truly appreciate it always :)
flattered you still visit my rambling's mami n truly appreciate it always :)
Re. 'An Open Invitation...'
18th Jul 2016 7:20pm
this is one smooth azz invitation bro..
hopefully this open invitation finds
that open heart you've been
searching for..
hopefully this open invitation finds
that open heart you've been
searching for..
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Re: Re. 'An Open Invitation...'
18th Jul 2016 7:38pm
Thanks bro. Truly honored n grateful for your words n time n support always :)
Re. 'An Open Invitation...'
30th Jul 2016 12:14pm
'Poundin' beats
of profound passion
Please...Be that one,
who gives, who wants
a soul of fire, '
How many times have I thought this to myself? Haha. Still untouched.
Loved this ink, PM. :)
of profound passion
Please...Be that one,
who gives, who wants
a soul of fire, '
How many times have I thought this to myself? Haha. Still untouched.
Loved this ink, PM. :)
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Re: Re. 'An Open Invitation...'
30th Jul 2016 3:49pm
Aaawww... My dear one you're so sweet! :) thank you... N "still untouched..." That's becuz ur around 'boys' not men but when u find a real one, trust n believe my sweetness...
Re. 'An Open Invitation...'
7th Aug 2016 11:24pm
Intriguing write, Poe, radiating subtle and tempting eroticism. Like this a lot and wish for your dreams to come true.
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Re: Re. 'An Open Invitation...'
8th Aug 2016 2:12pm
Thank you sweetheart. I'm kinda at the point where it no longer matters
I'll juss stick to imaginations :)
I'll juss stick to imaginations :)
Re. 'An Open Invitation...'
9th Aug 2016 3:14pm
Re: Re. 'An Open Invitation...'
9th Aug 2016 10:14pm
Aaawww...if u were trying to make my day, u have! lol thank you again. I'm very grateful for super kind remarks on my work n truly appreciate it much :)
Re. 'An Open Invitation...'
Anonymous
1st Sep 2016 10:50am
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3rd Sep 2016 10:14am