Deep feelings

Open mouthed laughter!
Lady Chi set the record straight

I feel you all the way

It's good to have soulmates around :-)! Thanks a lot, Rockinrobin!

Thank you, whale! Glad to have made you laugh and even gladder that you still call me LADY Chi :-)!

Wow! Awesome statement Ms. Chi

:-). Sometimes things just have to be said :-). Thank you, GW!

Lmao!! Well if you ask me, a woman has gotta love a guy (at least a lil! Lol) to wanna swallow him down lol
All praises due to the women who
DO deep lmao!

Oookay, that depends on so many things, Poe :-)! We will not elaborate that here, will we?
I rather wanted to emphasize the "feeling" aspect! Thank you, my dear!

I like the poem. I think that the word "apart" may be unnecessary, though.

Glad you like it :-). And thank you for the critique! I much appreciate it and will correct it, mentioning you as the source :-).

Das is doch kein echtes Fehler. Ich meine nur, daß das Gedicht besser fließt, ohne "apart."

Das ist ja eine Überraschung :-). Du sprichst Deutsch.
Nein, ich weiß, kein Fehler, aber du hast recht, es fließt besser.
Wenn man es so schreiben kann. Hört sich aber gut an :-).

Ich bin nicht in der Lage, Gedichte in Deutsch zu komponieren. Ich bin beeindruckt daß Du in Englisch dichtest.

Naja, ich mache Fehler :-). Woher kannst du Deutsch?

Einmal irgendwan hatte ich Deutsch auf der Schule studiert. Dann verbrache ich ein Paar Monate in Deutschland. Danach beschäftige ich mich mit Übersetzungen, deutsche Gedichten von Schiller und Heine ins Englische.

Ah, ich las es gerade. Dann kannst du sicherlich besser Deutsch als ich Englisch :-). Dein Deutsch ist jedenfalls hervorragend!

so well said, and so true ....
Excellent as always ...

I much appreciate your kind comment, dear JeJe! Thank you so much! xoxo

Boom shakalaka!!! This was a poetic slam dunk, Chiyo! Love it, and completely agree!

Hahaha! Dear Rain, I appreciate your boom shakalaka a lot! Made me laugh out loud. Thank you so much! xoxo

It would be funny
if it weren't so truly sad,
wouldn't it?

Yes exactly :-)  ...  
That's why I changed the first line from  
Isn't it funny to Isn't it tragic, after having given thought to it.  
Thanks, Ahavati, for the insightful comment!

preach it, Miss Chiyo
love this!

Hehe ... I'll do that, Miki :-). Glad you love it!
That this snappy little piece made it on your RL  
makes me HAPPY :-)! Thank you!

Wow! Just great!

Deep, you wanted to say deep, right, Lobo :-)?  
Thanks a lot for your nice words.

Slam dunk...in the deep throat Miss Chi :))  
I think some may confuse deep feelings with fetishes..but who knows...;)

The urban dictionary offers many entries on slam dunk :-).
Yes, Rina, some confuse deep feelings with sex. But there are also male gems.
Thank you for your deep comment :-).

Oh, erm ... well... does that mean you don't like the poetic form of it?  
Although deep throat isn't really poetic. So why not put it as you did.
Thanks for that interesting comment :-).

lust & love, I see them as twins;
one wears the mask of comedy, the other, the mask of tragedy.

fine work, Chi...

Which brings up the question, which one wears which mask.
Lust and love are kind of twins and as long as you label your intentions accordingly there'll be no confounding.
Some just don't have deep feelings. Just some, John, whereas your poems show real depth.
Thank you for your deep comment :-).