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Edge Of Life
on the edge of life I wait
to be taken beyond heaven
in limbo my spirit shall drift
over the seas of serenity
my transformed Angelic body laying
upon a purple lined pillowy cloud
to rest my wandering soul
soothing this shallow heart beat
looking down upon your poetry
still taking me beyond
realms of my imaginative mind
magnetically teasing my curiosity
all these years that I've known you
it's been only thru our gift of words
my smile hasn't printed upon your every write
I assure you my eyes have cast upon each one
read you at your most erotic cuuummm
tearing when gracefully inking a most beautiful
sensual piece taking me to a garden of serenity
of beauty only you know it's dwelling
(Inspiration ~ a comment left for me by "Again"
Thank you my friend for the blessing and
sharing the gift of your words with me)
to be taken beyond heaven
in limbo my spirit shall drift
over the seas of serenity
my transformed Angelic body laying
upon a purple lined pillowy cloud
to rest my wandering soul
soothing this shallow heart beat
looking down upon your poetry
still taking me beyond
realms of my imaginative mind
magnetically teasing my curiosity
all these years that I've known you
it's been only thru our gift of words
my smile hasn't printed upon your every write
I assure you my eyes have cast upon each one
read you at your most erotic cuuummm
tearing when gracefully inking a most beautiful
sensual piece taking me to a garden of serenity
of beauty only you know it's dwelling
(Inspiration ~ a comment left for me by "Again"
Thank you my friend for the blessing and
sharing the gift of your words with me)
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Re. Edge Of Life
7th Jul 2016 3:15am
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7th Jul 2016 3:17am
Awe Baby.....you're such an encourager......thrilled that you enjoyed this.....thank you....,purple smiles & hugs xo :)
Re: Re. Edge Of Life
7th Jul 2016 4:36am
Hey Kaivk.....thank you my friend....always appreciate you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Edge Of Life
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7th Jul 2016 4:14am
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Re: Re. Edge Of Life
7th Jul 2016 4:37am
Hi EW......thank you for the smile upon my page......glad you liked it.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Edge Of Life
7th Jul 2016 6:05am
all these years that I've known you
it's been only thru our gift of words ...
I take it as a complement lady
''Younger sis poet...'''
purplish flowery
and this is no imagery
you r poetry is
excruciatingly
L O V E L Y
keep at it don't fly
the cliff is too high
Yet I won't say bye
and write more poetry shy!
no coming now may be
again and again
so many read my cummming
no comment
as if they have never come
okay last time cummmmmmmmmmmm
it's been only thru our gift of words ...
I take it as a complement lady
''Younger sis poet...'''
purplish flowery
and this is no imagery
you r poetry is
excruciatingly
L O V E L Y
keep at it don't fly
the cliff is too high
Yet I won't say bye
and write more poetry shy!
no coming now may be
again and again
so many read my cummming
no comment
as if they have never come
okay last time cummmmmmmmmmmm
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Thank you my poet Brother......it's an honor to read your words......I'm thirlled that you like this one......you're comment was a wonderful inspiration......thank you for sharing words with me......honored you add this to your RL list......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re: Re. Edge Of Life
15th Aug 2016 3:52am
what one deserves one gets
flowery ur u say purply
i discovered some definition of purple will share it
flowery ur u say purply
i discovered some definition of purple will share it
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Re: Re. Edge Of Life
15th Aug 2016 6:20pm
Hey Again.....purple is majestic to me.......an inspiration it has been to me.....xo :)
Re. Edge Of Life
7th Jul 2016 2:39pm
Such loving sentiments within the lines of the beautiful poem, flower.
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Re: Re. Edge Of Life
8th Jul 2016 1:58am
SG you always make me smile with your words......glad you enjoyed......thank you....purple smiles & hugs xo :)
Re. Edge Of Life
7th Jul 2016 6:26pm
Oh the beauty of words - you put them together so skilfully, with such passion and depth - you truly are an artist :-)
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8th Jul 2016 2:03am
Davis how you make me blush......I'm honored and humbled by your words......thank you my precious friend for believing in me......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Anonymous
11th Jul 2016 7:35pm
Beautiful Sun Kissed, you inspire us all by finding the beauty in everything, bringing it to us as if we can reach and touch it...always find a reason to push that pen! With love - Sweet S xo :)

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Re: Re. Edge Of Life
17th Jul 2016 3:59am
Sweet S......receiving words like this from a top poetess as you are here......I'm so deeply honored......I'm thrilled that I inspire you......I'm getting tears......thank you my sacred friend......you encourage me greatly.......MAWH!!! Purple luv & hugs xo :)