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~hear His whispers and walk thru the door~
will never forget the day
you whispered "Hello!" so luvingly
when your heart hugged mine sweetly
feeling a special warmth thru my soul
just by reading your tender luving words
that I still feel within me this very day
when I become weary in life's trials
I lay in silent darkness and hear your voice
speaking to me with a passionate tongue
how beautiful is the sound of you
lightly tapping at the door to my heart
opening freely with my next deep sigh
such serenity I feel as you tiptoe in
can feel you breathing within me
while you walk leaving purple heart prints
silently my spirit slumbers in sweet dreams
so thankful to God for sending His whispers
and for you walking thru the door of life
to be joined with me as my ~soulmate for life~
one soul.....one heart......one spirit
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
you whispered "Hello!" so luvingly
when your heart hugged mine sweetly
feeling a special warmth thru my soul
just by reading your tender luving words
that I still feel within me this very day
when I become weary in life's trials
I lay in silent darkness and hear your voice
speaking to me with a passionate tongue
how beautiful is the sound of you
lightly tapping at the door to my heart
opening freely with my next deep sigh
such serenity I feel as you tiptoe in
can feel you breathing within me
while you walk leaving purple heart prints
silently my spirit slumbers in sweet dreams
so thankful to God for sending His whispers
and for you walking thru the door of life
to be joined with me as my ~soulmate for life~
one soul.....one heart......one spirit
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
Published 6th Jul 2016
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6th Jul 2016 7:24am
7th Jul 2016 1:17am
Thank you Baby for another blessed visit....glad you liked......purple smiles & hugs xo :)
6th Jul 2016 7:56am
This was/is a very Peaceful
and emotion inducing write
flowergirl.
It produces a kind of longing
desire to better things and
simpler living.
I knew that you were a gentler
soul but this is a different aspect.
"when I become weary in life's trials
I lay in silent darkness and hear your voice
speaking to me with a passionate tongue"
I also know this comforting reality.
Thank You.
and emotion inducing write
flowergirl.
It produces a kind of longing
desire to better things and
simpler living.
I knew that you were a gentler
soul but this is a different aspect.
"when I become weary in life's trials
I lay in silent darkness and hear your voice
speaking to me with a passionate tongue"
I also know this comforting reality.
Thank You.
7th Jul 2016 1:19am
Hi Pan.....you've touched me with your words......I'm so glad you've gotten the chance to experience this peace....there's nothing like it......thank you for feeling deep into my ink......purple luv & hugs xo :)
6th Jul 2016 9:53am
"when I become weary in life's trials
I lay in silent darkness and hear your voice
speaking to me with a passionate tongue"
when I read your poetry
I visualize the
F L O W E R G A L
AT HE FAIR VIEW MALL
do you know where tis it>>>>
I lay in silent darkness and hear your voice
speaking to me with a passionate tongue"
when I read your poetry
I visualize the
F L O W E R G A L
AT HE FAIR VIEW MALL
do you know where tis it>>>>
7th Jul 2016 1:21am
No I've never heard of it or been there......sorry.....thank you for your interest though.....purple smiles & hugs xo :)
6th Jul 2016 10:00am
'''''''''when I become weary in life's trials
I lay in silent darkness and hear your voice
speaking to me with a passionate tongue .....''''
marvelous here you excel beyond the realms of imagination any poet worth his salt can tell so do I again and again are you a Piscean you had me as a follower then go topsy- turvy again and wipe off all my stains those on your wall do remain I am just a poet young lady standing at the cliff the edge of life awaiting a strong breeze which will suck me above the clouds then Bravo I shall be left mid way between heaven and the seas just beklieve me flowery your poetry is magnetic at least for the dying poet in me I take your leave
I lay in silent darkness and hear your voice
speaking to me with a passionate tongue .....''''
marvelous here you excel beyond the realms of imagination any poet worth his salt can tell so do I again and again are you a Piscean you had me as a follower then go topsy- turvy again and wipe off all my stains those on your wall do remain I am just a poet young lady standing at the cliff the edge of life awaiting a strong breeze which will suck me above the clouds then Bravo I shall be left mid way between heaven and the seas just beklieve me flowery your poetry is magnetic at least for the dying poet in me I take your leave
7th Jul 2016 1:23am
Awe Again.....what inspiring words you leave me here.....I have pmd my response to you for this.....I will post it as soon as I find a pic for it.......awesome words you leave me.....thank you thank you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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6th Jul 2016 3:24pm
Such quiet passion throughout the whole poem.
Such a memory to look back and recall what started it all
"so thankful for God for sending His whispers" . . .
Maybe so thankful for(to) God for sending His whispers
Such a memory to look back and recall what started it all
"so thankful for God for sending His whispers" . . .
Maybe so thankful for(to) God for sending His whispers
7th Jul 2016 1:36am
Hey SG.....I always feel happy when you leave your smile my ink......glad you enjoyed the quiet time......thanks again for the word change......change lines at times and don't take all the words......appreciate you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
6th Jul 2016 4:44pm
lovely Flower finding your soul-mate is such a precious thing as is this write :)
love Crim
love Crim
7th Jul 2016 1:57am
Precious Crim......you always send such sweet luv my way......thrilled that liked this one.....finding a soulmate that luvs you back just as much you give him......is a wonderful blessing......purple luv & hugs your way xo :)
6th Jul 2016 5:42pm
7th Jul 2016 2:08am
Hi Faith.....I'm so blessed to see your smile once again......thank you....purple luv & hugs xo :)
7th Jul 2016 5:34pm
A really beautiful piece and so well written - gave me that warm fuzzy feeling :-)
8th Jul 2016 2:07am
Wowzers David......I luv warm fuzzies......your pleasant words just gave them to me.....thank you for sharing them......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
11th Jul 2016 7:38pm
Beautiful Sun Kissed, I am beginning to run out of ways to say stunning, beautiful, wonderful, breath taking, inspirational and so on....With love - Sweet S xo :)
17th Jul 2016 4:17am
Awe Sweet S......you're such a sweet soul.......you honor me with every comment you bring my way......tipping my pen in luv and respect to you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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16th Nov 2016 5:05pm
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17th Nov 2016 1:46am
Awe thank you Adam......I'm glad it touched you so......I was taking to a friend and I texted her that phrase of the title and it inspired me to write this......appreciate you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
