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shh
go back to sleep. close your eyes and drown peacefully the way you do after a sickness.
you are a sludge-and-butter creation rancid in the mould of the cellar.
you have a little something on your face- some misery- in the corner of your mouth.
no, it's still there.
what, did you think you were a goddess? did you think you were a queen?
were you so sure that the world revolved around your little tornado insides?
leave everything,
go back to sleep
Published 6th Jul 2016
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Anonymous
6th Jul 2016 10:53am
you are a sludge-and-butter creation rancid in the mould of the cellar.
you have a little something on your face- some misery- in the corner of your mouth.
heavy sentiment in this ink, excellent piece
so few wake up to begin with, :) xx
you have a little something on your face- some misery- in the corner of your mouth.
heavy sentiment in this ink, excellent piece
so few wake up to begin with, :) xx
7th Jul 2016 7:44am
Wow, a misery filled dark little piece here. Wonderfully written, I enjoyed it.
7th Jul 2016 11:43pm
8th Jul 2016 10:07pm
four years and i'm not there yet
but i have actually published a book :p i think 2 people have bought it and one person messaged me about it and i thoughtlessly did not reply
but i have actually published a book :p i think 2 people have bought it and one person messaged me about it and i thoughtlessly did not reply
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