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And with the dawn...
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My white knight came today to rescue me,
Though not by way of pale horse did he ride.
'Twas in a Ford, and glinting like the sea,
This knight of olde who's registered to drive.
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My white knight came today to rescue me,
Though not by way of pale horse did he ride.
'Twas in a Ford, and glinting like the sea,
This knight of olde who's registered to drive.
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Published 4th Jul 2016
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4th Jul 2016 8:35pm
4th Jul 2016 9:06pm
Anonymous
4th Jul 2016 8:43pm
You write with grace. I am humbled.
Peace Jade
Peace Jade
4th Jul 2016 9:15pm
I hope that means you enjoyed my little snippet of real life, so moved and so very glad was I to write it as it flowed...
you're very kind in your comment, FM dearest. Thank you, and safe holiday if it's one you observe.
ever
Jade
you're very kind in your comment, FM dearest. Thank you, and safe holiday if it's one you observe.
ever
Jade
5th Jul 2016 00:37am
The old and the new combined to make something good of both parts, and a poem to be enjoyed in whole for its wholesomeness!
5th Jul 2016 3:22am
Ahh thank you dear Viddax...
but where did Knights in white sedans come from? LOL you have me chuckling from your mischievousness!
but where did Knights in white sedans come from? LOL you have me chuckling from your mischievousness!
6th Jul 2016 00:28am
6th Jul 2016 5:41am
Ah yes I know, in fact, MadameL can verify to you my love of that group. I just didn't know how you did that, I got it right away...
MOST fitting, my thanks!
MOST fitting, my thanks!
6th Jul 2016 9:56pm
5th Jul 2016 4:48am
5th Jul 2016 6:58am
Drive safely and reach your destination in your chariot of white lightning!
JJ
JJ
5th Jul 2016 8:35am
5th Jul 2016 10:05am
Ahhh thank you, dear Katja.
It is a lovely task
to treat you to a smile,
and do it with style.
ever
Jadey
It is a lovely task
to treat you to a smile,
and do it with style.
ever
Jadey
5th Jul 2016 11:10am
"Froggy went courtin and he did ride Crambooo!!! "... lol! beaut little write indeed..Jadey!!
6th Jul 2016 5:43am
Ahh that's so sweet, with much thanks to you and your enjoyment, my endless friend!
Anonymous
5th Jul 2016 4:38pm
Jade,
And while you rode to breeze through the sunroof, I hope your knight contemplated the moon. :-)
Enjoyed!!
tornado
And while you rode to breeze through the sunroof, I hope your knight contemplated the moon. :-)
Enjoyed!!
tornado
6th Jul 2016 5:49am
blushy giggles😄
Ohhhh tornado you! I'm so glad you enjoyed, and left me one of your signature endless quotes!
😋
Ohhhh tornado you! I'm so glad you enjoyed, and left me one of your signature endless quotes!
😋
5th Jul 2016 5:29pm
Loved this Jade! The days of chivalry are not over. I hope that Ford was a Mustang. That's a knight's kind of car!
6th Jul 2016 5:52am
Dear crowfly, that's so true, and I thank you for your enthusiastic support for my little po'ms!
5th Jul 2016 9:40pm
lol, thank you Ahavati.
I passed your comment on to him and here's what he texted back to me:
"Yes you can... trust me..."😉
😳
I passed your comment on to him and here's what he texted back to me:
"Yes you can... trust me..."😉
😳
14th Jul 2016 1:37am
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