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-the keeper
yes, I still see you there
giving one eye to the sky
chanting a soothsayers prayer
as you draw vitality from the Sun
spellbound by your magic
I shape hearts in the sand
searching for a grain of my soul
to remind you, how far we've come...
Published 2nd Jul 2016
| Edited 3rd Jul 2016
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2nd Jul 2016 5:35pm
2nd Jul 2016 5:40pm
She wouldn't need a reminder if I wasn't moron... :)
Thanks for the words and add...
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Thanks for the words and add...
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2nd Jul 2016 5:51pm
Your humble admission
will suffice I'm sure,
Especially in a world
full of prideful liars.
will suffice I'm sure,
Especially in a world
full of prideful liars.
Your aura precedes you, my friend and I recognize it...
Thank you for your words, I needed to hear them, if only to help hold on to hope a little longer...
Thank you for your words, I needed to hear them, if only to help hold on to hope a little longer...
2nd Jul 2016 11:17pm
hearts in the sand
may go out with
the tide...
although of course
the good news
is...
may go out with
the tide...
although of course
the good news
is...
3rd Jul 2016 00:13am
You are too witty, my friend... That one stung a little, because unfortunately you're right, I guess we'll sea... ;)
3rd Jul 2016 00:39am
didn't mean to sting, I'm sorry...
I really hope the tide turns in
your favour...
I really hope the tide turns in
your favour...
3rd Jul 2016 00:52am
Hey, man it's ok, life is what it is. The fact that it stings means there's a reason to wait and see... :)
3rd Jul 2016 6:29am
Beautiful. Poignant. Your imagery is subtle but rich, and the simplicity echoes.
3rd Jul 2016 6:45am
Those are some very kind words, thank you for that and for reading...
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