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Origami Messengers
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While long trips he would be away,
He learned from me the little swans
He'd let loose in the evening, o'er
The dreams I never had until
His swans filled constellations with
Haiku and sisters Senryu
That only I would see each night
That brought me his companionship
While he is far away from me
Till back home once again, we two,
When I will whisper in reply
My origami messengers:
I bring the night
in raiments' endless stars
to thee
will summer
dare outshine their heat
in vain to place
my love,
the solstice waits at will
its turn at last
till then
let crickets still their trill
to hear our thrum.
.
While long trips he would be away,
He learned from me the little swans
He'd let loose in the evening, o'er
The dreams I never had until
His swans filled constellations with
Haiku and sisters Senryu
That only I would see each night
That brought me his companionship
While he is far away from me
Till back home once again, we two,
When I will whisper in reply
My origami messengers:
I bring the night
in raiments' endless stars
to thee
will summer
dare outshine their heat
in vain to place
my love,
the solstice waits at will
its turn at last
till then
let crickets still their trill
to hear our thrum.
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29th Jun 2016 2:22pm
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29th Jun 2016 9:13am
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29th Jun 2016 2:23pm
Re. Origami Messengers
29th Jun 2016 12:03pm
*stares at the last remnants of the night stars, obscuring in the haze of dawn's blushing approach...*
I see stars
Outlined in teal, black and jade
Cranes taking flight
What a beauty to wake to...
RL
geoff
I see stars
Outlined in teal, black and jade
Cranes taking flight
What a beauty to wake to...
RL
geoff
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Thank you so much dear Geoff.
a single gesture
to seed the heavens
above, below
-pebble
a single gesture
to seed the heavens
above, below
-pebble
Re. Origami Messengers
30th Jun 2016 6:01pm
I'm suddenly reminded
Of the almost forgotten art
Of writing Love letters
In foils of cigarette wrappers
Or torn out piece of paper
Folded like an airplane
And send by air
Of the almost forgotten art
Of writing Love letters
In foils of cigarette wrappers
Or torn out piece of paper
Folded like an airplane
And send by air
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Ooh dear Oxy, yes yes indeed..,
exactly so.
I thank you for this share with me.
with love
ever
Jadey
exactly so.
I thank you for this share with me.
with love
ever
Jadey
Re. Origami Messengers
Anonymous
30th Jun 2016 6:57pm
Oh goodgod
your words..your words!
makes your palace a
brittle beauty yet an
embroidery of calm.
Ahh.
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your words..your words!
makes your palace a
brittle beauty yet an
embroidery of calm.
Ahh.
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Ahh, most dear Malady, how you do honor me, unworthy I, so glad my written words were here for you to feel their ease and peaceful loving.
ever
Jade
ever
Jade
Re. Origami Messengers
30th Jun 2016 8:47pm
This is magic, Jade. I love the idea of origamis used for certain occasions when email doesn't cut it. Finding one strategically perched on my pillow is a particular joy. And those crickets ceasing their trill for the sake of your thrum allows me to picture you playing a lute in a Japanese garden. That might be a stretch but "Messengers" conjures a dreamy frame of mind, which I appreciate. Fine work, delicately folded.
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Ohhh dear crowfly, such a divine take on my piece... not a stretch at all. Reflecting the peace I felt when I wrote it, and everyone is feeling too.
Thank you for the honor.
ever
Jadey
Thank you for the honor.
ever
Jadey