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Today's Gossip
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There's no where else to go 'round here,
This small town has no use for me.
I drive in, signs read "Welcome, friend",
And leaving, read "Please come again",
None in between all those that say
"Sorry, We're Closed", "No Openings".
But that's okay, just passing through.
I sit a spell at Mavis' cafe
To nurse and sip my cup o' Jo',
My eyes on angled cars & trucks.
You see, no one will ever know
As long as I try not to speak,
And tip the waitress fifty cents,
Though Mavis died a year last week.
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There's no where else to go 'round here,
This small town has no use for me.
I drive in, signs read "Welcome, friend",
And leaving, read "Please come again",
None in between all those that say
"Sorry, We're Closed", "No Openings".
But that's okay, just passing through.
I sit a spell at Mavis' cafe
To nurse and sip my cup o' Jo',
My eyes on angled cars & trucks.
You see, no one will ever know
As long as I try not to speak,
And tip the waitress fifty cents,
Though Mavis died a year last week.
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Re. Today's Gossip
1st Jul 2016 00:27am
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1st Jul 2016 00:52am
Re. Today's Gossip
1st Jul 2016 5:12am
Jade, it reminds me of one of Bruce Springsteen's elegies to the loss of the American town... Americana pathos...
Love it
Love it
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Re. Today's Gossip
1st Jul 2016 5:29am
Yes, and right at a time you've been seeing that America firsthand. Right in the middle even as I write this to you.
-tig
-tig
Re. Today's Gossip
1st Jul 2016 7:24pm
Gossip. Urghhh.
Plus in a small town.
But one grows on it
Like, an open secret.that all knows.
Haha!
Plus in a small town.
But one grows on it
Like, an open secret.that all knows.
Haha!
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2nd Jul 2016 3:04am
Thank you so much, dear Oxy, how I so appreciate you stopping by to give me your thoughts.
love,
ever
Jadey
love,
ever
Jadey
Re. Today's Gossip
2nd Jul 2016 1:30am
I really like this. This is well written. It has an interesting feel to it. Thanks for writing and sharing this. I enjoyed this poem.
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Hello, and thank you miss for sharing your thoughts with me. And for what I call the "trilogy": the comment, the follow, and the recommendation.
ever
Jade
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Jade
Re. Today's Gossip
3rd Jul 2016 7:11pm
I love sentimental journeys to small towns, and I live near L.A. so it's kind of refreshing. This has a quiet beauty that doesn't exist on these urban streets. Fine work Jade!
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19th Jul 2016 8:21pm
Oh my friend, I don't know how your lovely comment slipped past me but I'm here now! I know the areas you speak of and its sadly true about much of SoCal. One has to go up to the Bay Area or further still to find such sights and feeling, before more of small town America even there disappears.
Re. Today's Gossip
19th Jul 2016 6:32pm
Lovely, clean, airy, room to imagine where you are and why you are there. Timeless.
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Re: Re. Today's Gossip
19th Jul 2016 8:13pm
Thank you so much, Poppy, your reception of my little piece is a pleasure to my day. :)