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Mood Swings Episode # 1
Maybe we can fold space
Perhaps
Collapse the tapestry
Move closer
By standing still
In momentary perfection
Goddamm alcoholic illusions. .
Bamboozled by Bombay
Once again..
Good for me
I need you...
Is what um tryin to say.
Poetry...
Don't fuckin suffice
When it's you
Who've become my favorite vice..
Makin me twice the man..
Got my alter ego and me plottin
Wantin to converge
And splurge
Menage a trois style. .
Over you
My center peace .
You should come get this..
Homey's home alone
Feelin mischievous
Devious. ..
Yeah..
Maybe we can fold space
And unfold some of them untold
Desires...
Like me you and Gaia
Sloshing in the mud..
While strokin those higher
And lower chackras..
....
Ok
My bad..
This was supposed to be
STRICTLY an emotional testimonial..
Metaphysical in nature
It really was..
But urges swoons the mental
Like the moon movin
Closer to the earth
Causin these tides to rise..
..and rise...
i...need to feel you
Physically. .
And this distance between us
Has become quite a disturbance
You need to feel
My inner turbulence
..
I mean..
Can i be your physics major?..
Put you under my microscope
..be your nerdy perv
Grope all of your feminine curves
Yes..
I have a dirty mind
..but the sweetest heart..
.....uhhhh
For you at least...
...
Come un-riddle
This beauty-beast complex of ours.
Ėts feast or famine right now
And we're at the nexus. ..
I can feel you churnin
In my solar plexus
Got my mental wheels turnin
..my phallus flexin
And sex is the only justifiable remedy
As far as i'm concerned
Bend over
Spread wide
Or ride me
Til the cows come home..
Just take these mood swings
Back and forth
Between your legs goddammit
Dude ain't picky
Long as i get to paste my
Sticky love notes on your walls. .
Yeah..
I'm horny and ornery
But don't act like you don't know me
I put up with your bullshit
So i feel like you owe me..
Show me..
Are you the woman
You claim to be..
Or is that all
A bunch of talk? ..
Published 27th Jun 2016
| Edited 25th Nov 2016
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27th Jun 2016 5:42pm
Missed your work nicely done and beautifully worded my brother, write on!
Red
Red
27th Jun 2016 5:49pm
That first stanza stopped my breath.
fold space...collapse the tapestry.
Just beautiful, Naajir.
fold space...collapse the tapestry.
Just beautiful, Naajir.
27th Jun 2016 6:29pm
Whoa...talk about "wax in' the poetic!" You pretty much waxed, buffed n shined this motha too!!! Hott damn this was a trilogy of erotic, romantic, n mental STIMULI... n I for one can't imagine
your intended NOT flyin sky high!!
Big upS bro!!! :)
your intended NOT flyin sky high!!
Big upS bro!!! :)
27th Jun 2016 10:46pm
When YOU want something/somebody you kickass
seeking it/her out. The object of this wild poem
will be beating down your door after reading this, or
sending you a poem just as hardcore as this one . . .
seeking it/her out. The object of this wild poem
will be beating down your door after reading this, or
sending you a poem just as hardcore as this one . . .
28th Jun 2016 2:27pm
Damn! I love the flow of this ... It has an element of randomness to it ... Yet the language is precise, impeccable ...
I totally get this ... Great vibe ... A testament to your skills Sir.
I totally get this ... Great vibe ... A testament to your skills Sir.
28th Jun 2016 4:12pm
"Its feast or famine right now
And we're at the nexus. ..
I can feel you churnin
In my solar plexus "i love the intensity...the urgent gut wrenching need of that line...Purely Passionate Ink Naajir..i enjoyed this immensely!!
And we're at the nexus. ..
I can feel you churnin
In my solar plexus "i love the intensity...the urgent gut wrenching need of that line...Purely Passionate Ink Naajir..i enjoyed this immensely!!
28th Jun 2016 8:53pm
I've been back to read this a few times since I first noticed that you published. You have a style that is unique, I think after reading several of your compositions. There is a balance of exposition, emotion, flowing from one to the other confidently. A charged write.
5th Jul 2016 9:01pm
Oh yeah!!! I have missed your pen.... Well Dayummmmm is all I can muster up because you just left me speechless with a smile that creeped across my face.... This was very sensual in a tasteful way... You make a woman want to say "well damn since you put it that way lead the way to the room" lmao!!!! Nicely done.
4th Nov 2018 7:08am
