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Splinters
Crack! my heart
splinters my lungs
breathless my muscles
cramp my body
crumbles my being
stops.
This is how it felt when you walked away.
splinters my lungs
breathless my muscles
cramp my body
crumbles my being
stops.
This is how it felt when you walked away.
Published 7th Jun 2016
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7th Jun 2016 4:41pm
Anonymous
7th Jun 2016 5:44pm
Ah! you break my heart. How dare you make me love this so!
Anonymous
7th Jun 2016 6:22pm
strikes at the reader. its a great read
Anonymous
9th Jun 2016 1:03am
I like the way the words cascade down the right-hand side of the poem, each time falling off the edge. Very clever. This is a poem that lives & breathes.
