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The ink slides under her skin
she tries to rest easy
beneath the pin pricks
that slowly
form the beauty
she knows lies within
trying to break free
dot by precious dot
slowly,
transforming into what
is in her heart,
so when he sees her again,
he will remember who she is
she tries to rest easy
beneath the pin pricks
that slowly
form the beauty
she knows lies within
trying to break free
dot by precious dot
slowly,
transforming into what
is in her heart,
so when he sees her again,
he will remember who she is
Published 12th May 2016
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12th May 2016 8:33pm
15th May 2016 6:40pm
Thank You Ahavati for the read and thoughtful comments .. always appreciated ... ox
Is this about getting a tattoo of the man she loves? Or is love the tattoo imprinted within?
Interesting write, vivid imagery...
JJ
Interesting write, vivid imagery...
JJ
15th May 2016 6:43pm
Thank You JJ for the read and thoughtful comments ... greatly appreciated ... this is about a symbol of love that only they knew about ... printed on the heart as well as the skin ..
12th May 2016 11:23pm
15th May 2016 6:45pm
Thank You SatanSperm for the read and thoughtful comments ... I wear it proudly ... and always with passion ...
13th May 2016 00:41am
"So when he sees her again, he'll remember who she is" my favourite line
Powerful. Excellent piece
Powerful. Excellent piece
15th May 2016 6:45pm
Thank you forbiddenfruit for the read and thoughtful comments ... much appreciated
13th May 2016 3:58am
15th May 2016 6:47pm
Thank You JohnFeddeler for the read and always leaving such kind words ... greatly appreciated ...
13th May 2016 1:10pm
You're so beautiful, the
runes your ink express imprints
my soule.
motherfreakingmary
-Noire
runes your ink express imprints
my soule.
motherfreakingmary
-Noire
15th May 2016 6:48pm
Thank You dear Noire for the read and such beautiful comments ... always a pleasure to see you here .. ox
13th May 2016 6:04pm
15th May 2016 6:49pm
16th May 2016 11:58am
oh jeje, you beautiful creature
you know just how to break my little black heart...
... this is a keeper
xo
you know just how to break my little black heart...
... this is a keeper
xo
17th May 2016 3:02am
Thank You Dear Katja for the read and beautiful comments ... always appreciated ...
Humbled and Honored by the add to your list ... oxo
Humbled and Honored by the add to your list ... oxo
