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days of fire
i don't miss you
never being mine
desiring only the hole
you left in me
feeding my heart pain
rage a torrent upon my breast
cruel was my lust
torment the paint i created with
feeling nothing now
i lament the days of fire
when you were the flame
i danced around
the gypsy of your dreams
see me now
empty of feeling
my carnal urges put out
agonizingly i am bereft
of my fruit
i can feed your arrogance
no more
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Re. days of fire
12th May 2016 3:37pm
This poem was wonderful. Could feel the pain behind the words.
Great job 😁
Great job 😁
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12th May 2016 4:02pm
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Anonymous
12th May 2016 4:23pm
Ah, my Queen. . .even the Queen of Darkness gets the blues. . .I don't know if this piece was intended for someone or if it was just simply a poem but however the case it was/is very touching. . .love to you. . .~xo, Devlin/TS.
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12th May 2016 5:27pm
Re. days of fire
12th May 2016 7:43pm
sadness stroked by a sense of madness
strike him out
blow him out
as a candle u blow
then glow
strike him out
blow him out
as a candle u blow
then glow
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12th May 2016 8:01pm
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12th May 2016 8:47pm
Re. days of fire
12th May 2016 11:19pm
This reeks of a sad, somber soul... My arms reach out, sending big hugs of comfort my sweetness
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Re: Re. days of fire
12th May 2016 11:30pm
Re. days of fire
12th May 2016 11:48pm
'agonizingly i am bereft
of my fruit...'
That's very sad... but hey, you're in full poetic bloom! ;)
of my fruit...'
That's very sad... but hey, you're in full poetic bloom! ;)
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Re: Re. days of fire
12th May 2016 11:53pm
just one of those days when passion blinks out for one it is flamed for another eventually ;)
thank you love Crim
thank you love Crim
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13th May 2016 2:47am
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Anonymous
13th May 2016 1:53am
My Beautiful Brenda, feeling the words of this write deeply lovely one... I hug you tightly accompanied with tender kisses...
I love you so much
Xoxo Taryn
I love you so much
Xoxo Taryn
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Re: Re. days of fire
13th May 2016 2:48am
aw thank you beautiful one..
a big smile gracing my face now :)
hugs and kisses you back..
I love you..
xoxo Brenda
a big smile gracing my face now :)
hugs and kisses you back..
I love you..
xoxo Brenda
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Re: Re. days of fire
13th May 2016 3:54am
thank you lovely Samantha for such a thoughtful comment..
yes live to burn with passion another day :)
love Crim
yes live to burn with passion another day :)
love Crim
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Anonymous
13th May 2016 3:21am
Beautiful Crim......what masterpiece......written with strength that can only come from deep within your soul......your lines thru out this made my heart sigh.......such beauty in this sad write......it leaves me smiling feeling the inner peace you must feel now .......luv this......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. days of fire
13th May 2016 3:55am
thank you beautiful Flower for showing me so much love hugs you back..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. days of fire
13th May 2016 6:07pm
this was very sad and I felt it deeply - it is possible to love and give too much especially when it is not the same coming back :-(
excellent inking as always :-)
excellent inking as always :-)
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Re: Re. days of fire
13th May 2016 6:41pm
thank you David yes it's possible and in my case true..
sigh oh well live to have my passion renewed by a different flame..
love Brenda
sigh oh well live to have my passion renewed by a different flame..
love Brenda
Re. days of fire
13th May 2016 7:39pm
i burn with the agony of your laments. I believe us poets feel such agony because we are so passionate.
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15th May 2016 1:45am
Re. days of fire
13th May 2016 7:53pm
Very sad, but glad that his arrogance will no longer find sustenance.
"the gypsy of your dreams
see me now
empty of feeling
my carnal urges put out"
These lines break my heart but I like to think the gypsy will return and prevail, no longer devoid of feeling. Fine work Crim!
"the gypsy of your dreams
see me now
empty of feeling
my carnal urges put out"
These lines break my heart but I like to think the gypsy will return and prevail, no longer devoid of feeling. Fine work Crim!
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15th May 2016 1:46am
Re. days of fire
13th May 2016 11:04pm
Oh this was painfully beautiful Crim..... and so damn relatable. I'm familiar with this ink's ache....
Ink love~
Ink love~
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15th May 2016 1:47am
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Anonymous
15th May 2016 10:18pm
You send me over many moons,
my pulse do ache in a deep and
vividly .
Wild and womanly I hold you
lady loves.
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my pulse do ache in a deep and
vividly .
Wild and womanly I hold you
lady loves.
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15th May 2016 11:03pm