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The Popsicle  (written by my little brother;Carlos)

This popsicle
I know this popsicle
It's orange
It's sweet
but it's not natuarally sweet
Sweetness was put into it
Without the sweetness
It's just a peice of ice
A bitter peice of ice 
Written by maria (IRK)
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