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Inspired by the Rain
Flushed Face cooled by it
New Shoes ruined by it
Courting spots damp by it
Yet cheered up by a Rainbow's end.
Tired Gardens brought alive by it
Millions of Tears disguised by it
Drifting along to sleep by it
Rain may you stay close by.....
New Shoes ruined by it
Courting spots damp by it
Yet cheered up by a Rainbow's end.
Tired Gardens brought alive by it
Millions of Tears disguised by it
Drifting along to sleep by it
Rain may you stay close by.....
Published 8th May 2016
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8th May 2016 11:45pm
8th May 2016 11:50pm
8th May 2016 11:52pm
No umbrella! Dance in the rain.
Her touch is an aphrodisiac.
Lovely words. You had me
at the title.
Her touch is an aphrodisiac.
Lovely words. You had me
at the title.
8th May 2016 11:57pm
Embrace..... Feel it on your Face!
What the heck do a Dance while your there!!!
:)
You got to love the Rain....
What the heck do a Dance while your there!!!
:)
You got to love the Rain....
9th May 2016 2:29am
what to say.... blue skies some time rain too..and they fall as beautiful words, collect 'em and wolla there you have it! a poem like the above one! Every line's got it's charm and the opening line's magic!
"Flushed Face cooled by it "
"Flushed Face cooled by it "
9th May 2016 8:01am
9th May 2016 10:23am
9th May 2016 4:09pm
The rain is so beautiful. A God given gift. And often we do not give thanks to the things we are thankful for the most
9th May 2016 6:13pm
9th May 2016 7:32pm
It is always inspiring... From the time the clouds are thinking about it until the rainbow's end. Excellent poem, I like its personality. :)
13th May 2016 7:23am
Good rhythm. I like the balance of good and bad, especially the sudden eruption of 'millions of tears disguised by it' which works very well.
The sudden break at the end works effectively. Ends on just the right note.
The sudden break at the end works effectively. Ends on just the right note.
13th May 2016 8:49pm
Echo John Feddeler. Looks ironic for a writer calling themselves bluesky. Sure there will be some couples and individuals who can relate to its effect on 'Courting spots'.
29th Dec 2017 8:58am
"Tired Gardens brought alive by it
Millions of Tears disguised by it
Drifting along to sleep by it
Rain may you stay close by....."
and close by you stay, dear Rain!!
absolute gem, yes
millions of tears disguised by it!!
and yes, what better lullaby than
falling rain on rooftops!!
poets pen!
welcomed back!
Millions of Tears disguised by it
Drifting along to sleep by it
Rain may you stay close by....."
and close by you stay, dear Rain!!
absolute gem, yes
millions of tears disguised by it!!
and yes, what better lullaby than
falling rain on rooftops!!
poets pen!
welcomed back!
29th Dec 2017 9:49pm
It's still raining in Ireland 🇮🇪
The cure for all ill's they say.
Let it pour I say!!
The cure for all ill's they say.
Let it pour I say!!
