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Venom~with Diamonddave75
kiss me darkly
with a tainted mouth
fill me with your void
cum to me with venom lips
catatonic embrace
slithering tongue
sweet spot
unlocking you
yielding to the black
you've reached into
oblivion finding
my hurt places
spider web laced lies
trapped in the abyss
you entered with gentle force
bringing me to life
fly trapped
with desire
sweet nectar
entices hope
death is sure
fallen fast
hard cock
pulsing within
take me darkly
enter my poisonous chamber
lose yourself in the throes
of divine ecstasy
knowing once you crossover
you can never return
the River Styx flows within me
cum in at your own peril
my passion
streams within
throbbing walls
griping tight
sacrificing
memories
in hope of
harvesting my seed
feed me darkly
deep in my corrupt womb
together we will bring
terror upon the Earth
Published 7th May 2016
| Edited 8th May 2016
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Anonymous
7th May 2016 10:58pm
Brenda, such an honor to spill ink with you.. we just get each other.. love you!!
Dave
Dave
7th May 2016 11:23pm
Anonymous
7th May 2016 11:54pm
Ah, "Venom". . .no other way to spew it!. . .Excellent collab, my Ally in Darkness and Sir Diamond. . .Enjoyed. . .love to you. . .~Devlin/TS
8th May 2016 00:23am
8th May 2016 00:01am
Fine collab from both of you with a striking contrast in styles.
"death is sure
fallen fast
hard cock
pulsing within"
These terse and brutal lines balance
feed me darkly
deep in my corrupt womb
together we will bring
terror upon the Earth"
I look forward to your reign of terror, Crim and Dave. Meanwhile I enjoyed this thoroughly.
"death is sure
fallen fast
hard cock
pulsing within"
These terse and brutal lines balance
feed me darkly
deep in my corrupt womb
together we will bring
terror upon the Earth"
I look forward to your reign of terror, Crim and Dave. Meanwhile I enjoyed this thoroughly.
8th May 2016 00:24am
thank you Sir Crow I think it came together with his Dominate hand and my more submissive yet dark style..
love Crim
love Crim
8th May 2016 00:29am
Dark seeds, n deeds spilled fluently from the two of you.., outstanding ink!
8th May 2016 3:37am
8th May 2016 1:16am
8th May 2016 3:39am
8th May 2016 4:09am
bitter harvest in this Gothic passion-play.
exquisite harmony in your dual performance...
exquisite harmony in your dual performance...
8th May 2016 6:18am
8th May 2016 5:16am
Thoroughly enjoyed. A certain kind of magic happens when two masters of the craft come together.
8th May 2016 6:20am
thank you Darkest Lord Hades a wicked smile is gracing my face :)
love Crimsin
love Crimsin
Anonymous
8th May 2016 7:47pm
THIS IS STUNNING!!!!! You have NOOOOOOO idea how happy I was as I squinted eyes as I clicked Add To Reading List in the hopes I had gained a space somehow....oh yes my two darlings....this is breathtaking and darkly seductive....I want to sneak in between the both of you and join in....All my love to you both...always and forever...
I love you both so very much!
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
I love you both so very much!
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
8th May 2016 10:53pm
beautiful one thank you graciously from both Dave and I..
I can't tell you how ecstatic I'm that you loved this one and added it :)
big smile gracing my face I love you so much!!!
love Brenda
I can't tell you how ecstatic I'm that you loved this one and added it :)
big smile gracing my face I love you so much!!!
love Brenda
9th May 2016 3:44am
10th May 2016 00:03am
9th May 2016 3:48am
yielding to the black
you've reached into
oblivion finding
my hurt places
Black dark hurt.......well, hell.....
you've reached into
oblivion finding
my hurt places
Black dark hurt.......well, hell.....
10th May 2016 00:03am
9th May 2016 5:09am
This is fucking magnificent!
I love this ..I adore this, a lot.
How delicious and edible. ;)
-Howlings
I love this ..I adore this, a lot.
How delicious and edible. ;)
-Howlings
10th May 2016 00:04am
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Anonymous
13th May 2016 3:30am
Amazing write Crim & Dave.......I really enjoyed this.......you're very creative with this one.......such beauty in your combined ink as one.....the pic you've chosen is brilliant......purple luv & hugs to you both xo :)
13th May 2016 3:56am
