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A Demonic Greeting
starving a twisted beast
is coming out to greet you
see me demented
of soul and thought
greedily feasting
sucking on your
deadly essence
poisonous pen
appeased
my demons moan
lady hard on
for your Devilish presence
wicked one my vice
seductress
of Hell it's self
sending legion on the march
feel my flame
as it laps at your
obscenity
feeds the whore in me
creaming out my desire
sent a demonic s.o.s
the coded message was heard
Hell's Queen is here
Lucifer's come to play
haven't seen him in months
my pussy had gone cold
now pulsating out my sin
let's dance the dance macabre
Published 3rd May 2016
| Edited 4th May 2016
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3rd May 2016 3:58pm
Lucifer hasn't just got the best music, he must have the best moves too. Very sexy.
3rd May 2016 4:13pm
Anonymous
3rd May 2016 4:24pm
You my dear I believe could capativate the wickedest of beast to your will of your essence 😘... Alway intrigued... That of your mind.
<3 dkruie
<3 dkruie
3rd May 2016 4:39pm
3rd May 2016 7:21pm
That one hell of a greeting the evil one lol... Awesomely dark n explicit... A real Crim original! :)
3rd May 2016 7:56pm
I love and adores this lady Poe thank you for showing me love on this write :)
love Crim
love Crim
3rd May 2016 8:52pm
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4th May 2016 5:09am
4th May 2016 00:06am
4th May 2016 5:10am
4th May 2016 00:14am
This is a really fun and seductive write that should get Satan to stick around.
" Lucifer's come to play
haven't seen him in months
my pussy had gone cold
now pulsating out my sin"
I'd still boot him out due to negligence. Hope so! You're better off in cooler climes doing the dance macabre. Save the last one for me....
" Lucifer's come to play
haven't seen him in months
my pussy had gone cold
now pulsating out my sin"
I'd still boot him out due to negligence. Hope so! You're better off in cooler climes doing the dance macabre. Save the last one for me....
4th May 2016 5:11am
Anonymous
4th May 2016 00:32am
Ooooo Crim......I know satan and his demons are chanting and dancing evilly with this dynamic write.......well done......so seductive and sexy.......enjoyed.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
4th May 2016 5:12am
4th May 2016 3:10am
4th May 2016 5:11am
Anonymous
4th May 2016 3:27am
My Beautiful Brenda, such a lovely darkened write bringing together three incredible forces... Clearly ones not to be reckoned with... Take a bow lovely one... His alter awaits...
I love you so much
Xoxo Taryn 💋
I love you so much
Xoxo Taryn 💋
4th May 2016 5:13am
beautiful one thank you for making my heart swell with joy at the love you continue to show me and my writes..
I love you :)
xoxo Brenda
I love you :)
xoxo Brenda
4th May 2016 9:06pm
"greedily feasting
sucking on your
deadly essence
poisonous pen
appeased
my demons moan
lady hard on
for your Devilish presence" ...I call her Devilicious...promising a toxic rush with every lick of the pen. Fervent ink, Crim! blue angel
sucking on your
deadly essence
poisonous pen
appeased
my demons moan
lady hard on
for your Devilish presence" ...I call her Devilicious...promising a toxic rush with every lick of the pen. Fervent ink, Crim! blue angel
5th May 2016 9:51am
Anonymous
7th May 2016 2:39am
Brenda, nobody just lays it on the line like you.. this is brilliant art, your words are toxic.. in a good way, like a high you never wanna come down from.. loved this, and love you..
Dave
Dave
7th May 2016 5:37pm
