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Two knees kneeling
Hear My plight
Aye! What have I become?
An empty carcass
waste of Myself
On the arms of loneliness
I Floated into endless abyss
Two hands cupped
Feel My pain
From Myself I depart
Leaving behind an unoccupied pod
Drowning in the abundance of crimson red and salt
Aye! What have I become?
An empty carcass
waste of Myself
On the arms of loneliness
Floating in the endless abyss
My life passing in misery
Heart burning away slowly
The northern wind blows
Tormenting memories
Release Me
Taste My sin
On dried and dead lips
Time stretches
My soul is empty
Feel the void
Aye! What have I become?
An empty carcass
waste of Myself
On the arms of loneliness
I Floated into endless abyss
Hear My plight
Aye! What have I become?
An empty carcass
waste of Myself
On the arms of loneliness
I Floated into endless abyss
Two hands cupped
Feel My pain
From Myself I depart
Leaving behind an unoccupied pod
Drowning in the abundance of crimson red and salt
Aye! What have I become?
An empty carcass
waste of Myself
On the arms of loneliness
Floating in the endless abyss
My life passing in misery
Heart burning away slowly
The northern wind blows
Tormenting memories
Release Me
Taste My sin
On dried and dead lips
Time stretches
My soul is empty
Feel the void
Aye! What have I become?
An empty carcass
waste of Myself
On the arms of loneliness
I Floated into endless abyss
Published 23rd Apr 2016
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28th Apr 2016 9:25am
Hullo
this is pretty good. I like the repeating stanza. the body of the poem gives a very bleak feeling. I think whatever it is your doing, you're doing it right
good stuff
this is pretty good. I like the repeating stanza. the body of the poem gives a very bleak feeling. I think whatever it is your doing, you're doing it right
good stuff
