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Mind Fucker
middle finger to the wind
why your aggression
is such a turn on to me
I'm unsure but i'll tell you this
it has me in a creamy state of mind
wondering if this harsh stance
was directed at me
hoping your realize
there are many infatuations
that cause my head to turn
hells' bitch not meant for you
would never think of speaking
to you Sir in such a manner
you make me shake like a little girl
cause me to tremble in my boots
knowing who is in charge
it is always with trepidation
I approach your throne
fucker of all fuckers
leaves me breathless
speechless at times
will always be the intellectual demon
who dominates my thoughts
enters my dreams
always delivering a mind fuck of the finest order
Published 15th Apr 2016
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15th Apr 2016 10:47pm
15th Apr 2016 11:42pm
16th Apr 2016 00:07am
16th Apr 2016 00:16am
16th Apr 2016 1:22am
Your hiatus was extremely to long
Brenda, although I know you had
your reasons, but, I like your
brutality by words so, don't stay
away anymore.
Encore... Dantalyon
Brenda, although I know you had
your reasons, but, I like your
brutality by words so, don't stay
away anymore.
Encore... Dantalyon
16th Apr 2016 4:37am
dearest Dantalyon thank you for the love I'm here to stay my friend..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Anonymous
16th Apr 2016 1:50am
My Beautiful Brenda, loving the "subgressive" stance you take within these lines...
"you make me shake like a little girl
cause me to tremble in my boots
knowing who is in charge
it is always with trepidation
I approach your throne
fucker of all fuckers
leaves me breathless"
Masterfully done lovely one!
I love you
With love - Taryn xoxo
"you make me shake like a little girl
cause me to tremble in my boots
knowing who is in charge
it is always with trepidation
I approach your throne
fucker of all fuckers
leaves me breathless"
Masterfully done lovely one!
I love you
With love - Taryn xoxo
16th Apr 2016 4:43am
my loveliest of Queens I love you so much thank you for embracing me and this write..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Anonymous
16th Apr 2016 2:08am
Brenda, speechless.. in your return, you are raising the bar.. as only you can.. my inner demon needs more.. loved this.. and love you!!
Dave
Dave
16th Apr 2016 4:45am
thank you Dave my brother and friend you moved me greatly with the love you showed this write..
I love you..
xoxo Brenda
I love you..
xoxo Brenda
16th Apr 2016 4:32am
O, Dearest Crim, how I missed you! The Unholy Trinity is complete again. Let the reign be lengthy and full of debauchery.
16th Apr 2016 4:52am
My Darkest Lord Hades I can't wait..
says giggling wickedly let us get in all kinds of decadent mischief ;)
thank you for the love..
love Crim
says giggling wickedly let us get in all kinds of decadent mischief ;)
thank you for the love..
love Crim
Anonymous
16th Apr 2016 11:00pm
'always delivering a mind fuck of the finest order' ... oh my!. . .And I don't even blush that easily but that last line just punches you in the gut! I would h8te to be on the receiving end of this poem as the pen is always mightier than the sword!. . .love to you, ~Devlin/TS
18th Apr 2016 10:16pm
my Darkest Queen a better compliment I couldn't hope for on this write thank you..
love Brenda
love Brenda
17th Apr 2016 11:14pm
only you can take a mind fuck and make it almost desirable - you have such skill :-)
18th Apr 2016 10:17pm
19th Apr 2016 1:28am
You are a definite feast for the mind. And a magnificent example of someone who is comfortable in the place in which she belongs.
With the appropriate reminders as needed, of course
With the appropriate reminders as needed, of course
19th Apr 2016 3:48am
Anonymous
19th Apr 2016 5:52am
You bleed the most righteous
fucking shit, I have ever read
from anyone.- [Ever.]
Did you catch that?
Good, because you're that
tasteful.
fucking shit, I have ever read
from anyone.- [Ever.]
Did you catch that?
Good, because you're that
tasteful.
I'm deeply touched and humbled by your most gracious comment thank you..
love Crim
love Crim
