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Naughty Girl
deeply driven sexually
you are the desire
that makes me burn
lusting after you
the salty taste of you
after a good brawl
the haughty whore in me
thinking of other ways
you can use those fists
as you roughly enter me
fingering me first
licking tasting tangerine flavor
then fisting my tight pussy
making me bow to your Dominate hand
moaning out my submission to you
flipping me over face held down
fucking my ass hard, working my rim
showing me who's boss
for my disobedient ways
slapping my ass, pounding me
as you break your naughty girl
stretching tight holes
with angry thrusts
of your bulging cock
little gasps of pleasure and pain
escape my full lips
Mastered by the best
taking your cock down my throat
no protest is heard as you fuck
my pretty little mouth
you pull me by the hair
telling me "the next time
you want to speak out of line
think of me bitch"
choking me as you squirt a load
down my throat
then gently you lick my sore pussy
as crimson blooms on silken white sheets
bringing tears of ecstasy
the bitch in me brought
to her knees before her king
Published 16th Apr 2016
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Anonymous
16th Apr 2016 1:40am
My Beautiful Brenda...feasting off the naughty in you my lovely one....how could one not with lines like this?
"making me bow to your Dominate hand
moaning out my submission to you
flipping me over face held down
fucking my ass hard, working my rim
showing me who's boss
for my disobedient ways
slapping my ass, pounding me
as you break your naughty girl"
I love you!
With love - Taryn xoxo
"making me bow to your Dominate hand
moaning out my submission to you
flipping me over face held down
fucking my ass hard, working my rim
showing me who's boss
for my disobedient ways
slapping my ass, pounding me
as you break your naughty girl"
I love you!
With love - Taryn xoxo
16th Apr 2016 2:48pm
thank you beautiful one smiling wide from your comment..
I love you so much the ways you inspire and delight me ;)
love Brenda
I love you so much the ways you inspire and delight me ;)
love Brenda
16th Apr 2016 1:41am
16th Apr 2016 2:49pm
16th Apr 2016 2:13am
Brenda, aka Crimsin.. welcome back my lovely sister.. you're killing it.. this is sweet art.. your ink bleeds every ounce of your heart and soul.. i'm high, after reading your words.. love you!!
Dave
Dave
16th Apr 2016 2:49pm
Anonymous
16th Apr 2016 4:43am
I am in awe, this is fking hot
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and the picture is nice as well
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and the picture is nice as well
16th Apr 2016 2:50pm
Anonymous
16th Apr 2016 11:37pm
Ouch! & Ooh! ... I felt every brutal thrust of this piece down to the last drib. . .As always, my Ally in Darkness does not fail to shock and awe her fans!. . .love to you, ~Devlin/TS
18th Apr 2016 10:14pm
my Darkest Queen thank you most graciously for the love you've shown me on this write..
love Brenda
love Brenda
17th Apr 2016 11:22pm
God! you really put me in the moment and I enjoyed every second of that moment - you are the Mistress, nay the Queen of this genre :-)
18th Apr 2016 10:15pm
18th Apr 2016 4:27am
Well damnnnnnnn!!!! That was lava, Crim! You put the N in naughty! Good lawd!! xo
18th Apr 2016 10:15pm
19th Apr 2016 5:28am
took her around the world on a wild ride.
hardcore deviant poetry, Crim...
hardcore deviant poetry, Crim...
19th Apr 2016 1:51pm
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20th Apr 2016 5:23am
20th Apr 2016 6:38am
yes my ecstasy was found in my closing thank you for reading and commenting..
love Crimsin
love Crimsin
22nd Apr 2016 9:18am
"the salty taste of you
after a good brawl
the haughty whore in me
thinking of other ways
you can use those fists"....nice like a five finger death punch.... very hot ink Crimson :)
22nd Apr 2016 3:19pm
