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The Taste of Her~
Poetry flattered the gate I decided to walk through
and I never looked back
until she straddled my face and spewed her ambrosial...
rich language down my throat.
She’s been there when he couldn’t be.
She’s still wiping away the blood of my own selfish bigotry.
Gave me calligraphy wings when others tried to cage me,
pleaded for me to erect straight, expand my gait
and offer her a full length of my syntax courage
through balladry footsteps.
I’ve never been hesitant in allowing her to
run her cryptic tongue all over my body,
in hopes my abstained intellect and unfed mind,
would master her poetic strokes-
or inherit her hypnotic vibe in wet-invisible language,
etched on my skin.
Poised to penetrate parchment as fingers grip tightly;
intense burn,
like the sun wrapping its shine around the hope of Calvary.
Altering my lust for my punctuation’s charisma,
when my reasoning and thoughts split like the receding tide
of an ocean floor.
She…
Spit on metaphoric hands and glossed her parabolic shaft
before directing her need for me to moan
a ruth-ful verse in her midst,
and I’m…..
I’m mesmerized at how she bends my cerebral joints
into a symphony of wordplay,
exploding on paper into lines called fragmented experiences.
She seduces my untamed imagination.
She flirts with my untapped creativity;
sweet drops of emotions seasoned in her essence...
making it difficult for me to walk away
though I doubt if I would ever stray…..
too caught up in Poetry’s thick preposition
and fascinated with her opulent, creamy, sweet.... taste.
Rain~
Published 14th Apr 2016
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Rain
I don't normally quote lines in my comments but these lines blew me away,..
until she straddled my face and spewed her ambrosial...
Gave me calligraphy wings when others tried to cage me
inherit her hypnotic vibe in wet-invisible language,
etched on my skin
Altering my lust for my punctuation’s charisma
I’m mesmerized at how she bends my cerebral joints
into a symphony of wordplay
and fascinated with her opulent, creamy, sweet.... taste.
I love the entire erotic ode to your muse!
JJ
I don't normally quote lines in my comments but these lines blew me away,..
until she straddled my face and spewed her ambrosial...
Gave me calligraphy wings when others tried to cage me
inherit her hypnotic vibe in wet-invisible language,
etched on my skin
Altering my lust for my punctuation’s charisma
I’m mesmerized at how she bends my cerebral joints
into a symphony of wordplay
and fascinated with her opulent, creamy, sweet.... taste.
I love the entire erotic ode to your muse!
JJ
20th Apr 2016 5:00am
Wow! You sure don't quote lines, so I know these must have snapped you into my poetic-mind for a few seconds. :) Thanks JJ! I'm so happy you listed her, she's a new fav of mine....xo
14th Apr 2016 7:39pm
Lovely Rain words fail to express how beautiful, tender and so perfectly seductive this write is..
love Crim
love Crim
20th Apr 2016 5:01am
I love when my ink steals the voice of an amazing poet like yourself, Crim! I'm humbled, thanks for keeping her...xo
14th Apr 2016 7:48pm
extremely artistic erotica surreal & spectacular.....i think i should read a while instead of writing...
20th Apr 2016 5:03am
:) .....it's quite alright to give your pen a breather and take in some of the poetic scenery around here, without creating. So stoked you're keeping her, T! Thanks hun...
14th Apr 2016 8:17pm
20th Apr 2016 5:04am
14th Apr 2016 9:15pm
Mmmmmm... I too know n love taste
N she's terribly addicting don't you think?
Outstandingly expressive, sensually intoxicating too :)
N she's terribly addicting don't you think?
Outstandingly expressive, sensually intoxicating too :)
21st Apr 2016 5:46pm
...she's very addictive, Poe! Love the way she makes me feel.....poetically of course. Thanks hun...
Anonymous
14th Apr 2016 10:21pm
Sonsista....yeah well, this really will be quite easy to comment on.....
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With love - Taryn xoxo
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With love - Taryn xoxo
21st Apr 2016 6:15pm
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15th Apr 2016 2:15pm
so well said the way poetry frees the soul to soar and allows the mind permission to express the way each person experiences the world. I do love this. It also speaks for me
21st Apr 2016 6:20pm
18th Apr 2016 5:34pm
....this reminds me in very abstract way of the premise behind the movie, "Crossroads".....Robert Johnson meeting Legba at the crossroads, the souls exchange and the inevitable seduction bearing forth musical greatness. Who did *she* meet to influence this great, surrealistic erotically tinged masterpiece? Alluring ink that challenges the mind.....
21st Apr 2016 6:21pm
22nd Apr 2016 8:05am
ohhh rainy lady, yes
this is the essence of self-expression
distilled to its most primal properties ....
... your delivery is so sensual,
i'd like to order a shot of this
{maybe two}
xoxox
this is the essence of self-expression
distilled to its most primal properties ....
... your delivery is so sensual,
i'd like to order a shot of this
{maybe two}
xoxox
26th Apr 2016 8:02pm
Anonymous
1st May 2016 5:23pm
Sexy Rain......I thought for sure I commented on this sensual tribute to who seems a poetic majestic soul........the last stanza sums it up sexily.....enjoyed this very much.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
22nd May 2016 5:23am
Thank you flowergirl! Most poets only need to lick her essence and be full for days....
