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Nostalgia
I recall your lips:
at times wide open
or closed, depending on your mood,
hugging at times or,
vigorously sucking the
back of my neck;
just under my hair.
at times wide open
or closed, depending on your mood,
hugging at times or,
vigorously sucking the
back of my neck;
just under my hair.
Published 6th Jul 2011
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6th Jul 2011 10:55am
6th Jul 2011 11:33am
a beautiful poem ophelic.
like all of yours, it might be short but it says a lot not only of the subject but also of you as-well.
fair play to ya.
like all of yours, it might be short but it says a lot not only of the subject but also of you as-well.
fair play to ya.
6th Jul 2011 11:49am
6th Jul 2011 8:29pm
I really, really like how the title gives the poem it's essence. Agreeing with Eamon also.
6th Jul 2011 9:05pm
7th Jul 2011 7:55am
and to me the title comes as a thriller and a stealer...because before reading it one may have innumerable pictures in their mind and after reading you proved them all wrong.
28th Oct 2011 00:47am
28th Oct 2011 10:24am
