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Willow Tree

Down the river goes
Down the corners
of a willow tree.

Written by opheliac

Published 28th Jun 2011

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Anonymous

17th Dec 2011 6:28pm

I'm not sure the first "down" is needed. Otherwise this works as a pretty good haiku. It creates a simple, compelling image. Thanks for the read, Opheliac.

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