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Vulnerable
You touch me with your vulnerability
When you open up to me
Expanding universes
Holding you under my wing
Protection
When you open up to me
Expanding universes
Holding you under my wing
Protection
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Re. Vulnerable
27th Mar 2016 6:42pm
it's the opening up that can be the most difficult thing :-)
excellent ink :-)
excellent ink :-)
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27th Mar 2016 7:30pm
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Re: Re. Vulnerable
27th Mar 2016 7:32pm
Thx S
Would love to write like it's all the time but the fire within calls ,pme to another location. ...
The painting is mine btw ...
xxo
Would love to write like it's all the time but the fire within calls ,pme to another location. ...
The painting is mine btw ...
xxo
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Re. Vulnerable
27th Mar 2016 7:49pm
Thx
Posted another with a similar painting , it's hard to resist the fire, isn't it ?
Posted another with a similar painting , it's hard to resist the fire, isn't it ?
Re. Vulnerable
27th Mar 2016 11:24pm
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27th Mar 2016 11:52pm
Re. Vulnerable
28th Mar 2016 2:10am
You've touched on such an important truth, one I just read about today. The more vulnerable a woman is, the more the man wants to protect her. The more he protects her, the more vulnerable she is. It's a beautiful cycle that is initiated by open trust and only breaks down through dishonesty.
This is well conveyed and they painting, again, is indicative of emotion through color. Well done.
This is well conveyed and they painting, again, is indicative of emotion through color. Well done.
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Re. Vulnerable
28th Mar 2016 2:44am
You have a point there ....
Hard to change thougn, it's in our DNA to protect, just like a Mother who worries about her kids ...
Appreciate the expansive comment
Hard to change thougn, it's in our DNA to protect, just like a Mother who worries about her kids ...
Appreciate the expansive comment
Re. Vulnerable
28th Mar 2016 6:26pm
Ahhh, Granite, luv ~ :-*
This is truly an exquisite creation. Concise yet immeasurably powerful and profound, you convey the depths of the soul.
I crave this. I suspect, though, that even men need to be vulnerable betimes and have a safe haven, a harbor from worry and care.
Mayhap, those who love each provide that solace needed by the other for vulnerability comes in different ways, ne c'est pas, luv? :-*
This is truly an exquisite creation. Concise yet immeasurably powerful and profound, you convey the depths of the soul.
I crave this. I suspect, though, that even men need to be vulnerable betimes and have a safe haven, a harbor from worry and care.
Mayhap, those who love each provide that solace needed by the other for vulnerability comes in different ways, ne c'est pas, luv? :-*
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Re. Vulnerable
28th Mar 2016 6:28pm
Timing has to be right, then we fold into each other .....
The rest is chaos ....
Thx Savaja
The rest is chaos ....
Thx Savaja
Re. Vulnerable
29th Mar 2016 11:53pm