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28th Mar 2016 11:08pm
28th Mar 2016 11:55pm
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28th Mar 2016 11:39pm
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28th Mar 2016 11:56pm
As a professional photographer, let me just say that the composition and balance of this of excellent in accordance to the rule of thirds. Great subject matter and contrast as well.
Well taken and written.
Well taken and written.
29th Mar 2016 00:12am
29th Mar 2016 1:19am
Living my entire adult life in a Steel Mill that recycled rusty metal, I so appreciated this poem.
Mountains of rusted scrap steel would meet me everyday of my life. And as in your poem, every now and then, the scrap yard would be interrupted by a blooming beauty. You have no idea how much all we steel workers would appreciate it.
Scribble on my friend, Your poetry helps change the world to for the better, one verse at a time.
Mountains of rusted scrap steel would meet me everyday of my life. And as in your poem, every now and then, the scrap yard would be interrupted by a blooming beauty. You have no idea how much all we steel workers would appreciate it.
Scribble on my friend, Your poetry helps change the world to for the better, one verse at a time.
29th Mar 2016 2:00am
30th Mar 2016 5:15am
I love all that you’ve done here; wonderful artistry and the meaning in beauty that finds its way from ruins. And it’s pink.
30th Mar 2016 12:43pm
