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Serenity's Spell
I could only take her...in metered doses
Her liquefied hypnosis must be served precisely....
To the milligram...
A fraction more..
And I am no more...
My mental traction...lost to me..
Overwhelmed by the soothing tsunami that is she..
Her gentle undertows...
Her subtle..undertones
Whisking me away....
Away to a hidden realm....To Her Queendom...
Where the beast that waylays beneath I cannot reside
Where my narcissism dissipates in the melody
Of her sing-song breeze...
Where my jade is vanquished by the shade cast by
The lasting grandeur of her femininity....
Where I am stripped of all this worldly besmirchment
Watching as it slowly drip off of me....
Like a blackened symbiote rejected from its host
I am Sankofa manifest...
I have come back to the Original Eye of me
Her lingua now the tapestry of Eye
Weaving me whole once again...
With her golden threads of
Restitution redemption and reconciliation
Eye...am cleansed....
Baptized by she...this humble apprentice of Eternity
Eye.....yearn to be graced by her presence
Beyond these scriptures..
If Eye could only....
If Eye could just.....touch the hand that stirs
Heaven's oasis...
Look into the irises that would peer through my Soul
Just once....standing face to face
And let us speak in our own electric silence...
Let our ancestral vibes permeate the air about us...
Let disambiguation tell the epic of us...
For eons we have crossed paths...
She and Eye
Grazing by one another....
In between the most innocuous moments
My mind...in childish vain would grasp at a thousand straws
Trying to recall such moments...
Yet my Spirit remembers her....vividly
Like a translucent portrait laying seductively...
Patiently....on my ocean's bed
Illuminating...resonating...
From the deep within me...
Pulling at me...
Calling me to the surface....
Eye swim valiantly..defiantly...
Against the torrential and unrelenting waves
Of my ego-self
Then suddenly...EYE GASP!
And inhale that long awaited breath...
As Eye drown..
Overwhelmed by the consumption of her divine liquor
My skin laminated by the overflow of her libations
A fraction too much...Eye suppose
And Eye am now gloriously condemned to her Queendom..
Where the soothsayer is omnipresent...
Where Eye am....
Once again....
No more...
Published 17th Mar 2016
| Edited 4th Feb 2019
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17th Mar 2016 6:03pm
Where my narcissism dissipates in the melody
Of her sing-song breeze...
I think that's one of the most astounding ways
to describe love. Because only Love can dissipate
the ego of self. Well done, Naajir.
Of her sing-song breeze...
I think that's one of the most astounding ways
to describe love. Because only Love can dissipate
the ego of self. Well done, Naajir.
17th Mar 2016 11:06pm
18th Mar 2016 2:12am
i love the way you use imagery to create a vision. Thanks for sharing, i love it.
18th Mar 2016 3:01am
"Overwhelmed by the soothing tsunami that is she..
Her gentle undertows...
Her subtle..undertones
Whisking me away....
Away to a hidden realm" love that..makes me think of rainbows..of hope..of promise..of the calming quiet of the eye of a storm just before it takes you.. Breathless...into wide eye wonderment of the unknown
Splendid Scribe Sir!!
Her gentle undertows...
Her subtle..undertones
Whisking me away....
Away to a hidden realm" love that..makes me think of rainbows..of hope..of promise..of the calming quiet of the eye of a storm just before it takes you.. Breathless...into wide eye wonderment of the unknown
Splendid Scribe Sir!!
19th Mar 2016 10:35pm
Loved the trip you took me on and remain spellbound and in awe..curtsy bow
20th Mar 2016 5:39am
An all consuming verse and passion that forbids the existence of any other reality - a vortex of verse - fine writing indeed
21st Mar 2016 8:35pm
Naajir, this is an awesome ode to the goddess in all women. And dude the flow is silky smooth. Bravo Don Naajir!
29th Mar 2016 8:20am
Dang dude! My props in words can’t cover the splendor of this poem. Your talent is endless!
Where my jade is vanquished by the shade cast by
The lasting grandeur of her femininity....
Where I am stripped of all this worldly besmirchment
Watching as it slowly drip off of me....
Like a blackened symbiote rejected from its host
I am Sankofa manifest...
I have come back to the Original Eye of me
Her lingua now the tapestry of Eye
Weaving me whole once again...
With her golden threads of
Restitution redemption and reconciliation
Eye...am cleansed....
Baptized by she...this humble apprentice of Eternity
^^^^^This right hurr! It’s the Shiznit!! I love this!
Where my jade is vanquished by the shade cast by
The lasting grandeur of her femininity....
Where I am stripped of all this worldly besmirchment
Watching as it slowly drip off of me....
Like a blackened symbiote rejected from its host
I am Sankofa manifest...
I have come back to the Original Eye of me
Her lingua now the tapestry of Eye
Weaving me whole once again...
With her golden threads of
Restitution redemption and reconciliation
Eye...am cleansed....
Baptized by she...this humble apprentice of Eternity
^^^^^This right hurr! It’s the Shiznit!! I love this!
29th Mar 2016 5:38pm
absolutely superb bro... no other writes like this... keep that inferno max *big daps* :D
