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lines blindly
writing poetry
as i slept
a whir of words
in my head
i woke
to dream the dawn
as perfect cotton wool
Published 4th Jul 2011
| Edited 20th Sep 2014
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4th Jul 2011 11:18am
All those 'w's remind me of the sound a loom makes when you press the peddle down. I like it.
5th Jul 2011 9:22am
Must be words whirring round your head too then, M - sounds like you've been meddling with the pedal yourself.
Thanks for visiting.
Best ~ Abra
Thanks for visiting.
Best ~ Abra
