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Melt
I begged her Melt..
And she right into me..
Slid down in serpent wind..
Fast licks to take me out of body..
I Fuck high shiver sigh...
Tongue snaking
Shaking as labia parted
To tickle kiss
My bend to her pout..
Escalate with my scream..
To gesticulate her deeper..
By my writhe..
And with my grind..
Till i cream...
As my cherry beat down
I hover her in glad return
Of sweet berry bliss..
Yes as she Melt
And love me love me.....
Yes we love like first kiss..
Written for Audio up soon...
And she right into me..
Slid down in serpent wind..
Fast licks to take me out of body..
I Fuck high shiver sigh...
Tongue snaking
Shaking as labia parted
To tickle kiss
My bend to her pout..
Escalate with my scream..
To gesticulate her deeper..
By my writhe..
And with my grind..
Till i cream...
As my cherry beat down
I hover her in glad return
Of sweet berry bliss..
Yes as she Melt
And love me love me.....
Yes we love like first kiss..
Written for Audio up soon...
Published 15th Mar 2016
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15th Mar 2016 3:15pm
Thank you sweetheart. I am so behind on reads...you are prolly on a million sixteen by now...but needs to.read me some...lol. Will soon darlin...thank you Walt for your words and support...
Love
Jen...
Was suposed to be an audio...cannot wrestle it out of youtube!! Friggin magic box this phone...lol
Love
Jen...
Was suposed to be an audio...cannot wrestle it out of youtube!! Friggin magic box this phone...lol
15th Mar 2016 5:19pm
Oh you have to make a friggin youtube vid to post audio on DU...and i am.a dullard at tech. I have it recorded...have it "not" uploading to youtube so i may present it here...grrrr!!! Lol...
15th Mar 2016 3:29pm
Super sexy ink Jen. Another in a long line of excellent poems.
WIth lots of love,
John
WIth lots of love,
John
15th Mar 2016 5:12pm
15th Mar 2016 5:55pm
15th Mar 2016 5:58pm
Ahhh, calamitygin, luv ~ :-*
This is quite the sizzling piece. You have created somewhat evocative and redolent of the sheer sensation of it all.
You are quite adroit with this, luv. You have a special skill with this very free-form, free-fall kind of poetry, almost a loose schematic etching of the thing, yet a long, luxurious slide into the heart of eroticism.
Delectable, aren't you... ;-*
This is quite the sizzling piece. You have created somewhat evocative and redolent of the sheer sensation of it all.
You are quite adroit with this, luv. You have a special skill with this very free-form, free-fall kind of poetry, almost a loose schematic etching of the thing, yet a long, luxurious slide into the heart of eroticism.
Delectable, aren't you... ;-*
15th Mar 2016 7:54pm
I sure as fuck hope so Savaja. Lol
Wow..seriously...thank you. I blush.
(No i dont..pant for your comments. I eat them up with spoon marked S) lol
Love
Jen
Wow..seriously...thank you. I blush.
(No i dont..pant for your comments. I eat them up with spoon marked S) lol
Love
Jen
16th Mar 2016 1:33am
15th Mar 2016 8:49pm
Love you serpentine ways Jen. That "melt" could have a couple of meanings, my fave being a shared orgasm.
"My bend to her pout..
Escalate with my scream..
To gesticulate her deeper..
By my writhe..
And with my grind..
Till i cream... "
Writhing, grinding or undulating, you're a total turn on Jen. Excellent work. Can't wait to hear the audio. Maybe some moans and sound FX?
"My bend to her pout..
Escalate with my scream..
To gesticulate her deeper..
By my writhe..
And with my grind..
Till i cream... "
Writhing, grinding or undulating, you're a total turn on Jen. Excellent work. Can't wait to hear the audio. Maybe some moans and sound FX?
16th Mar 2016 1:41am
Thomas I am always tickled to death to see you...and thank you. You know i respect your opinion so very much..
Love and miss you
Jen
Love and miss you
Jen
15th Mar 2016 9:10pm
Jennifer this is delicious! It is a slide into Sapphic love of the most sizzling kind. You really made woman loving woman a nectar to savor with delight. The imagery just took me in for a long lingering taste. You got it going my love.
Love to you forever,
John
Love to you forever,
John
16th Mar 2016 1:34am
Oh thank you baby. So much.
My love to you forever John...and all my soul
J
My love to you forever John...and all my soul
J
