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Wishes
I see them mostly
on very sunny windy days
Swirling and giggling about
whispers they could say
What was your secret wish?
They will never tell
If they dare speak of them
that will break the spell
We all believed at some point
when we pulled that dandelion fluff
And closed our eyes
with hearts full of surprise
No one knew my wish,
however it did come true
All was right in my world
the first time I heard you say
I love you...
on very sunny windy days
Swirling and giggling about
whispers they could say
What was your secret wish?
They will never tell
If they dare speak of them
that will break the spell
We all believed at some point
when we pulled that dandelion fluff
And closed our eyes
with hearts full of surprise
No one knew my wish,
however it did come true
All was right in my world
the first time I heard you say
I love you...
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Re. Wishes
Anonymous
15th Mar 2016 1:38am
Beautiful, Mysterious.. simply beautiful..
Dave
Dave
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15th Mar 2016 1:43am
Thanks Dave. Those are the most beautiful words anyone could say and hear, especially if they mean them. <3
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15th Mar 2016 1:41am
I have wished so many times and even though I know they will never come true, I find some comfort in the mystery of wishing them anyway...
jj
jj
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15th Mar 2016 2:02am
this is like a little gem from childhood....you are on a roll thanks for taking me there :)
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15th Mar 2016 10:20pm
Makes me long for the innocence of childhood, the faith that wishes just might come true. And there's nothing like the rush of hearing that "I love you" for the first time, even if it's from a little playmate. This is a heartwarming write and a gentle thrill. Fine work Lady!
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15th Mar 2016 11:14pm
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16th Mar 2016 3:34am
This is lovely, such a sweet recalling of childhood innocence, and better yet, a reminder that wishes can come true. 💖
~C
~C
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16th Mar 2016 6:21pm
Gosh... Very beautiful n yea I remember those dandelions too... Such a magic in them floating thru the air :)
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18th Mar 2016 7:34pm
Thank sweetie, still cant help myself when I see them. I have to pull one and make a wish. <3
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27th Mar 2016 8:21pm