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Rain
Tiny drops
tickle my face
Slowly
then more
Umbrellas broken
feet are bare
Rain down on me
straight hair turns kinky
Feels warm
and sassy
splash in puddles
feel like a kid
Dancing in the rain
these types of days
erases some of the pain....
Published 15th Mar 2016
| Edited 18th Mar 2016
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15th Mar 2016 1:31am
...to touch your inner child once in a while is a beautiful thing....dance as long as you can :)
15th Mar 2016 1:38am
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15th Mar 2016 1:40am
Thank you Dave, sometimes the softer side comes out in me as well. Plus, I adore when it rains. That warm straight rain thats not too hard. Like Mother Nature is calling to you come out to dance and splash and play. <3
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15th Mar 2016 3:17am
It's the innocent happiness we find in tiny things when you are really feel happy. :)
Beautifully written. :)
Beautifully written. :)
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16th Mar 2016 8:54am
My Dearest Lady,
This is a beautiful, light hearted write. Thourghly enjoyed the innocent and joyful feelmof the write.
Keith
This is a beautiful, light hearted write. Thourghly enjoyed the innocent and joyful feelmof the write.
Keith
18th Mar 2016 7:37pm
Thank you very much sweetie. The softer side is still one of my faves. <3
20th Mar 2016 1:02pm
YES! Splodging a spectacular pastime. Beautifully captured. Thank you from one Lady to another, X Lady Rain
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