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Veni Vidi Vici
Veni Vidi Vici
Please teacher teach me
The preacher has been preaching,
But I haven't heard a damn thing
I have lessons to be learned
And Respect to be earned
It's my inner fire for desire that has yet to burn
Veni Vidi Vici
These words can't reach me
I have achievements that still need achieving
It's too bad you don't believe me
It's a shame when I show up,for you there's no peace
Feel free to use your privacy to privately
Continue to be despising me
I came, I saw, I conquered
Feeling free, feels good
When you are your own sponsor
In my mind there is my own concert.
Please teacher teach me
The preacher has been preaching,
But I haven't heard a damn thing
I have lessons to be learned
And Respect to be earned
It's my inner fire for desire that has yet to burn
Veni Vidi Vici
These words can't reach me
I have achievements that still need achieving
It's too bad you don't believe me
It's a shame when I show up,for you there's no peace
Feel free to use your privacy to privately
Continue to be despising me
I came, I saw, I conquered
Feeling free, feels good
When you are your own sponsor
In my mind there is my own concert.
Published 3rd Jul 2011
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3rd Jul 2011 3:46am
This was a strong poem. A bit choppy at times, but didn't do too shabby fitting the whole thing together. I liked the power emanating from you, from your words.
3rd Jul 2011 6:51pm
3rd Jul 2011 6:54pm
